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#1 User is offline   haruno_xiah 

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Post icon  Posted 06 October 2008 - 10:22 AM

ok ok..

tis only my amateur voice.. blush.gif
im jus a newbie here, its only my 1st time to post my song here.. ^^
so..
need comments from all ppl here ya lo .. unsure.gif

my soundclick adress is :
my SOUNDCLICK address

its my YUKI NO HANA song :
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6945442

hear it.. and enjoy it.. tq for viewing la ... sweatingbullets.gif
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#2 User is offline   GEtMeSuMRiCE 

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Posted 06 October 2008 - 01:03 PM

I just got this song out of my head, and here you are with your pretty cover.

Where have you been all this time? You should post more covers! I'm your fan now. biggrin.gif

I think you have a really pretty voice. I actually think it's uber cute. smile.gif But I just LOOOVE how you reached those high notes in the chorus. It's so pretty! You reach those high notes so well. You reach with a sort of opera voice, but it fits! Very well done!! Really! smile.gif

I'm looking forward for more covers from you.

One advice would be when you're singing with the instrumental, try to play around with the volume of the instrumental when recording/mixing because in the beginning, you kindof overpower the instrumental, but later on, the music overpowers your voice. Play around with the volumes, so that your voice and the background music isn't stepping over each other. smile.gif
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Posted 06 October 2008 - 03:19 PM

Your voice is beautiful. Your vibrato seems to come out very naturally which makes the song very soothing because some people force out their vibrato. The high notes are also very beautiful. I think you did great (:

Keep on singing !
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#4 User is offline   *PeACH*IT*UP* 

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Posted 06 October 2008 - 06:44 PM

Ahhhhhhh!!!!! It's so pretty!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDD. I soooo love your high notes!!! They just came out so like wonderfully!!!
PeACH TT___TT I'm so forgetful it's a curse! T__T
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Posted 06 October 2008 - 07:53 PM

wow, this is really awesome. i enjoyed it heaps. keep up the good work =]
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#6 User is offline   haruno_xiah 

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Posted 06 October 2008 - 09:50 PM

@ GetMeSomeRice : Ah tq for ur advice ^^ ok , i know, later the music will overpower my voice xD i'll keep it up. ah...
my fan? haha... tqtq happy.gif ... well, sory for late post my songs here ^^;

@mimirella : wah? reli? tq... i thought before my vibrato not perfect O_O but if u said so, i now ... erm.. a little enjoy .... XD but then , i will alwis keep it up again ...^^ thx..

@*PeACH*IT*UP* : waaa... so tq.. u love my high notes? its seems like not reli perfect ah.. ^^ , i must doin hard work again lo.. ^^ thx..

@fizzl3 : Tq tq ... i alwis tryin to keep up da good work .. ^^
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Posted 06 October 2008 - 10:26 PM

hiaat.. i wanna sing that song 2.. from hear ur song.. tongue.gif

awesoome voice range and pitch lo xD

keep it upp..

let's dance~~ =3
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Posted 06 October 2008 - 11:00 PM

oooohhh wow that was really nice^^
i really like your voice, it sounds really nice^^
i'd really enjoyed listening to it,
great job done^^

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#9 User is offline   Xiah Myungjin 

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 12:00 AM

LOLL .. U posted a thread at the same time with Nieve's XDD ..

Yeee.. As I told you before ! I like your tone here best ! Keep working on it <3

I think u hit the low notes very perfectly. But, when it comes to the higher notes, the tone become less attractive. But good job on not straining it and u add very natural vibratos all along.

Keep practising and go audition for SNT XD .. * 2 members chair left *

LOL, I really hope u can do opera songs. Cos we havent got one =[ .. That'll be ur speciality XD .. * grins to GEtMeSuMRiCE *

Keep doing better at every songs ! Jiayoo !

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 12:11 AM


Harrruunnoo ,
I didn't know you had Soompi as well XD haha ,

Anyways, Like I said when we were singing online the other time, Your voice is really nice and natural [: , Of course there are some pitchy bits etc , but that can be solved through practice

Anyways, Awesome ! [:

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 02:36 AM

wahh .... tq tq for viewing..

@nieve : yea hun... XD tq ya.. ur voice oso nice ... i luv ur aimini coopereruww~ keep up da good work too ^^

@Lynni3z : Oh reli ? im so happy to hear tat. u can enjoyed listenin to it~ waa. =) tq..
keep hearin my another songs later ya..happy.gif

@ xiah myungjin : Yooo!! Tq edwin =) aaa.. im too embarashed actually, O_O but.. nieve told me to post it here... XD
so, jus tryin.. XD uh.. tq ya.. but my vibrato not perfect oso i think ><


@Lamassu : Thx lamah! =] huah... ya i still had many fals tone O_O >< ... i will try my bst again later ... =}

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 04:10 AM

I think you have a very pretty tone for your voice :3

The things I think you have to work on:

Sometimes it sounds very dull and it sounds like you ran out of breath during the higher parts. I also thought because this song was a ballad, it could be more fluid than the way you're singing it. I also thought your vibrato was a little too fast for this genre.

Otherwise, you were generally on pitch and it sounded quite nice =)
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#13 User is offline   haruno_xiah 

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 08:20 AM

waa.. its erm erm.. KOHANA??
hehe..
i love ur voice .... <3

erm..
ya...
still too fast my vibrato ?
ok ok .. i will try change it to be better next time =]
tq..
ur advice reli usefullll to me =]
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Posted 12 October 2008 - 09:16 AM

huaa... XD
sumbody leave comment again.. XD
i need to hear all ppl comments XD
cos need to improve my voice =]


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