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Taboo.... *sigh* Fed.frickin.up. I completely give up.

#1 User is offline   Genesis 

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Posted 07 October 2008 - 09:31 PM

081009 Edit;; i worked really hard on this. Yah i know Im not great. But I give up completely now. Obviously Im -never- worth any crtique or time. I'm sorry I don't do WG like everyone else.
As long as no one ever bother me to mix for them again, because it's quite obvious that I'm only an amazing mixer when its useful for other people, not when I work by myself.
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AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
From the day the promo single came out. I was weak in knees. (so when the PV came out, you could imagine my state) Anyways, Kumi is one of my top idols. Shes sexy, classy, talented, unique and everything I'm not. XD
AND THIS SONG IS ABSOLUTE GREATNESS. It's different, the lyrics are sexy, but also unique as it touches on all sorts of stuff. (For one thing, about taboo stuff duh. Lke girl-girl ect. XD)
It's her best material since BUT. Which I always wanted to do that single, but never got around to it. To make up for it, I did this song right away.

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One of those projects I couldn't stop from doing, too excited. @___@ The end is a bit energy-lacking slightly, it's 1AM here, and i wouldn't stop for nothing, but parents are asleep. XD So I had to be quiet. Poooooooo~ As some of you know, I usually sing very lightly Dx I always sing like a child, its like a complex since I rap like a guy. XD So, Im trying to be more mature sounding, and its working. XDD
I admit, the chorus is weak, I SUCK HARDCORE at chorus and harmonziing business, never learnt how. So sorry, its weak but meh.
The opening
is not the greatest, I accidently erased over my good copy of the first verse. Dx But by the time I hit the middle I was on fiah! XDD I like the mid-section of the song best.

Its finally something Im kinda proud of, and its finally a full song at that. I was suprisingly comfortable, and with singing, I almost never am. I know in the morning, ill start hating it, but tonight, I hope you enjoy.
edit next day;; hahaha yah, i hate it now! It always happens. XD
C&C WELCOMED ALWAYS!

TABOO~ Keep Coming *wiggles eyebrows*
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Posted 08 October 2008 - 10:07 AM

You sound awesome *__*

there's nothing more to say for me though xD~ I neither know the song nor can rap properly like you to give you advice xD
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Posted 09 October 2008 - 11:01 AM

Thank you kindly for even bothering to listen. You made me feel better.
Haha~ Its not rapping but I appreciate it.
Song's addictive, try it sometime!

B a b y i t 's D e s t i n y ▬ I stand for 5 • 5 stand for me. Hyunnies aren't in my equation.

' I've analyzed anythin' and everything you do - I'm physically, mentally over-obsessed with you '

Last ♥ FM - Come knock on my door, I'll always have just the right tune for you.
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Posted 09 October 2008 - 02:14 PM

GEEEEEEEEEEEEZUS. You are amazing. I never heard this song before, but I think I'm going to download it now that I've heard you cover it wonderfully =]

I don't know what happened to make you fed up and all and it's not my business to know, but I do want to let you know that you are an amazing individual. You have so much talent! Who cares about everyone else?! YOU WORKED HARD ON THIS AND IT REALLY SHOWED! I think you are great. That's just my two cents.

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Posted 09 October 2008 - 09:12 PM

what a supersupersexy cover :]
its true that more people should listen to this
the preciseness of everything amazes me
shows how much work was put into it
dont mind the soompers
make music for the enjoyment, not for the critiques XD

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Posted 09 October 2008 - 10:24 PM

Honestly, I clicked on this BECAUSE it wasn't a Wonder Girls cover haha I like Nobody but it is nuts how many versions there were in a week, I feel your pain.
I reaaallly loved this song, so I was excited to hear your version ^^ It's cool because your voice is higher then Kumi's~ but its just as sexy! It gives the song a different flavor but keeps the same feel. I can tell you put alot of time into this too, and you really ARE a good mixer. I do agree with you though, it does get alot better towards the middle of the song, I can tell you got excited haha but it came out sounding really good. I enjoyed the whole thing, and I'll have to thumb through your other stuff now too, I saw Speak No Evil in there~~ love Bennie K! wink.gif
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 07:28 PM

Dangg, your voice is sexyyy, haha. Never heard this song before, but it sounds so pro. Sounds like a lot of effort was put into this.
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 12:03 PM

Sorry for sounding all mad... but yah it really hurt me, when like... well anyways.

Thanks for commenting guys, you seriously made me feel better ^^v even a little.

@dailypanda
I wouldn't call it -anything- close to amazing, I did work hard, since I'm not a good singer. But yes, go download it! You'll instantly love the song, it's crazy addictive and sexy.
Thanks, because you cheered me up, Im glad you liked it.

@Ru
I wish i could just do it for fun, and I did enjoy it, but I want desperately to know how to imporve and ask if I'm ever getting more accurate. It's hard when i see my thread go... 1 day, 2 days... 40 views... no comment...Like it's a bit painful, and sometimes it hurts so much, considering, I'm not one of those people who simply put some quick-one-shot LQ works out. i work extrememly hard to improve everytime I do something, so thats why I become hurt is all. ^^v But thanks for your comment too~ I hope it was a little good.

@Kiseki-Yuna
*sigh of relief* Someone who knows the song shuld give the best advice haha. You like the song too? It's fabulous.
Oh don't thumb through my stuff please, i'm no good. This up to dat is only 1/2 full songs, and the oly half-decent song I have. T^T Don't, if you still want your hearing. Oh yah I did about half a cover of Speak no Evil, yes Bennie K is awesum, but I can handle Kumi vocals 10x more than I could Yuki vocals. Although Cico's rapping was super fun, and I think it came out okish, I rceieved no comment on soompi for it. Go figure. Its prolly best you dont listen to it, but yah.. anyways Thanks a lot for your comment. I will work hard in the future. ^^

@jaykidding
I think I strained a bit, maybe not exactly sexy, not like Kumi anyways lol. Thanks for your comment as well, I'm so lad some people at least now had a listen to it.

B a b y i t 's D e s t i n y ▬ I stand for 5 • 5 stand for me. Hyunnies aren't in my equation.

' I've analyzed anythin' and everything you do - I'm physically, mentally over-obsessed with you '

Last ♥ FM - Come knock on my door, I'll always have just the right tune for you.
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 01:32 PM

i totally agree -o- soompiers are very biased.
just because this isn't WG, BB or DBSK,
doesn't mean it isn't worth attention and love!

trust me, i know how you feel <3333 T____T

i don't really know the song.
so i can't really give a really good critique >__<
sometimes a tad flat/sharp. but like i said i don't know if it's you
or if she's doing it on purpose in the original...

the effects are awesome.
except sometimes i wish your voice was like thicker?
more layers i guess... like it sounds very thin TT^TT

but very sexy ~ and fun sounding <3



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Posted 11 October 2008 - 02:28 PM

ya i totally agree with you~~
most ppl go for the idol songs - -;;
but i dont understand the song lol
but u sound so good!! and wow
i like this song lol anywyas
UR AWESOME!!

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Posted 11 October 2008 - 03:44 PM

Yeah I completely agree. And a lot of the times people don't bother to click on threads unless they hear the person is 'good' or they're just talked about a lot or if they're friends, so often critiques aren't given.

But I thought this was an AMAZING cover - my headset stopped working in the middle so I can't give proper criticism, so once it starts working again, I shall update this post smile.gif

And actually, I'm glad you're not covering WG or all those other songs because I'm honestly sick of all of those everywhere aha.

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Sounds great! smile.gif
The only thing is (since I haven't heard the original), it sounds like you were off pitch at times and sometimes the notes were flat.
Other than that, love your voice smile.gif

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