I used to love wriitng these quick poems. I always felt they pushed the limits of creativity within the boundaries of being concise. So if you've got something to say within three lines of 5-7-5 syllables, then please post it here. They can be original or published, but if it is not your work, then please credit the appropriate individual.
I'll start.
Writing a haiku
Not as easy as it seems
I really must say
And my favorite haiku ever written by a high school chum by the name of Josh Mallamy:
Don't shake a baby
A margarita yes, but
Never a baby
Have A Haiku! Those 5-7-5 poems we all had to write as kids
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 12:16 PM
The only good high is an Epik High.
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 12:48 PM
haha I remember I started writing these in 3rd grade. They were fun and entertaining
Here's a really stupid one
Summer has gone by
School is in my life again
Tortured by teachers
I just made that up just now. It's not bad, actually. lol
Here's a really stupid one
Summer has gone by
School is in my life again
Tortured by teachers
I just made that up just now. It's not bad, actually. lol
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 12:55 PM
Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 03:00 PM
darn these homework SSSSS.
i know i must get through them.
but ma ah ah an.
did that make any sense?
it did to me.
another one.
i love soompiers.
they sure say what's on their mind.
soompi it all out.
did that one make sense?
um.
*skips away*
take care ya'll.
i know i must get through them.
but ma ah ah an.
did that make any sense?
it did to me.
another one.
i love soompiers.
they sure say what's on their mind.
soompi it all out.
did that one make sense?
um.
*skips away*
take care ya'll.
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 03:13 PM
QUOTE (Ringo. @ Oct 10 2008, 03:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
=D
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 03:18 PM
Soompi is the place
to post up stupid haikus
and get laughed for it
to post up stupid haikus
and get laughed for it
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 04:05 PM
i dont like homework
i think i'll procrastinate
and go on soompi
i think i'll procrastinate
and go on soompi
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Posted 10 October 2008 - 06:20 PM
QUOTE (Ringo. @ Oct 10 2008, 04:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
Stole mine D=.
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 10:56 AM
A more serious one:
He is all I need
Each day with Him is precious
I hope He knows that
He is all I need
Each day with Him is precious
I hope He knows that
The only good high is an Epik High.
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 11:14 AM
I remember these
I hated doing this stuff
It was so stupid
I hated doing this stuff
It was so stupid
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 02:40 PM
QUOTE (Ivy202 @ Oct 10 2008, 08:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Haiku might be hard
And they ruin your damn life
But just relax and go on Soompi for help.
And they ruin your damn life
But just relax and go on Soompi for help.
Hah how cute.
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 02:44 PM
QUOTE (Ringo. @ Oct 10 2008, 03:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
noo!
i was gonna use that xD
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 02:45 PM
QUOTE (Ringo. @ Oct 10 2008, 01:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
but sometimes they don't make sense
Refrigerator
LOL.
Threadless shirt. <3
I don't get it.
Is that a haiku? I thought it was 5-7-5.
Unless... I counted the syllables wrong in the first line?
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 03:57 PM
band aids and hot sauce
yummy nummy octopus
ice cream taco poo
I have no clue, that popped out from my head and it makes no sense at all lol
yummy nummy octopus
ice cream taco poo
I have no clue, that popped out from my head and it makes no sense at all lol
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 04:02 PM
My back is hurting
I want a refund right now
For that massage chair!
And that's the truth!
I want a refund right now
For that massage chair!
And that's the truth!
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 04:04 PM
I wish mummy would
stop stuffing food down my throat
'Cuz I hate junk food.
stop stuffing food down my throat
'Cuz I hate junk food.
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 07:50 PM
Thanksgiving Weekend
Celebrating Canada
Homework On My Mind... TT
Celebrating Canada
Homework On My Mind... TT
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Posted 11 October 2008 - 10:48 PM
Jaejoong is sexy.
I want him naked on bed.
Grape flavored condoms <3
I want him naked on bed.
Grape flavored condoms <3
