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Heaven (ballad Ver.) By Jimi Originally DJ Sammy! Come Listen!

#1 User is offline   SMtraineeWannaBe 

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Post icon  Posted 06 November 2008 - 06:09 PM

NO SILENT LISTENERS PLEASE! smile.gif C/C appreciated!

MORE OF JIMI'S AMATEUR HARMONIES! YEAH!


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i've had a lot of time to record lately! so here is another one!

the super low note at the end was fun to do... i didnt even kno i culd go so low.... lmao it tickled me nose hairs biggrin.gif

enjoy! and comment please!


laugh.gif this one is just for fun-->> Heaven Hamster Version

Heaven


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Posted 06 November 2008 - 06:17 PM

rofl!
ahaha i like the hamster singing
cute!

no for your ballad....
i'm going to be completely honest here
so be prepared
i told you have great vocals
and your vibrato is really good!
and your singing is really improving!
the tone of your vioce is also very nice, and it seems
like you have more control of your vocals now too. =]

yes, you have too much time xD
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Posted 07 November 2008 - 07:23 PM

HAHAHAAHHAH!!!!
i click the hamster one first!!..i started crackin!!.xD...LOVE IT!!!..hahaha
ok..to the original..=P
HAHAHAHA!!...low notes tickle ur nose hair?!..xD...man..i never heard that b4...funny funny
love ur tone!...o0o0o..1:59 was hott!..^^ everything after that is like...mint chocolate good!..=]
goodness..i never knew how to spell 'amateur'........thanx for lettin mee know...kek kek
o0o..the last part harmonies wasn't too bad
hope to hear more??..u should do something with a nice beat...=]

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Posted 08 November 2008 - 06:35 AM

your vibratto seems too united. you should use different vibratto for different parts.
like ------~~ on where verses end. but u are always ~~~~~~~. get what im saying?
yea... and learn to control the vibratto speed.

alright enough about vibratto.

but i think you are too obsess(?) with vibrattos. you over did your vibrattos. it wasnt required in some parts.
yea... so learn where to put them and where not to. your voice is amazing though ^^
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Posted 09 November 2008 - 03:30 PM

babiixj: lmao aha ha thanks!

yah it really did!!!! i was like.... this feels soooo weird!!! like it was like the feeling of when you hum... but more intense.... aha ha ha thats the only say i can think of how to explain it! aha ha ha

1:59?! *checks it out* sweatingbullets.gif sweatingbullets.gif sweatingbullets.gif aha ha ha ah thanks! mint chocolate?! i dont like mint and chocolate together.... mellow.gif tongue.gif

a nice beat?! any suggestions?!


osamayomama:

oooo! ok ok! thank you for the advise! smile.gif ill work on it!

learn to control the speed? like is mine to slow?

ill pay more attention to that! i never thought of that before.... aha ha ha thank you so so much! biggrin.gif
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Posted 09 November 2008 - 03:34 PM

OMG JIMI YOUR BACK =D!!!!!!!!!
you have awesme vocals and you're improving each time happy.gif!
As osamayomama said, you overdid your vibrattos. Just keep it down a notch next time and you'll be awesome smile.gif.
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Posted 09 November 2008 - 03:53 PM

OOOPS!!!!!! i forgot katie's reply! lol SRY KATIE sweatingbullets.gif


kibumkthero:

lol i liked the hamster one too! thats y i posted it! aha ha ha

wtf katie!!!!! u sounded like u were going to bash the HELL OUT OF ME! aha ha ha but thanks!!!!!!

mz-dud3tt3: YEAH! im back sorta.... howve u been nhu?!

aha ha ha yah.... i gess i associate ballads with hella vibrato... ill take it down a notch next time! thanks!


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Posted 09 November 2008 - 07:14 PM

WOW.
ur amazing O_O!
Makes me wanna sing

CREDITS go to CANDYHEARTS*!!
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Posted 09 November 2008 - 07:59 PM

JIMI!! Way to tell me u posted!! boo =( im not first.
anyways um post more!!! and yea
deff ur voice fits for ballad but its a little
too much vibrattos are too much but
people have their own style so i cant really
tell you to fix it~ like u remind me of hwe sung?? (휘성)
vibrattos~~

and nice harmonies!!! <3

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Posted 09 November 2008 - 10:54 PM

oh yay! i`m commenting after my beloved nkp!

hi jimi! i miss you sad.gif

i just want to say that this is lovely! i kinda want to listen to this till i sleep smile.gif
yes, it`s like 2 am and i`m awake. so sad.

why is your voice so soothing?! you`ve improved so much... like your control is a lot better yay! i`m so proud of my little dongseng jimi! hahaha

i might be getting worse by the day. i barely sing now... booooooooo

your hamster version made me LOL.. my roommate is sleeping hahaha. hope i didn`t wake her.

less than three

Superjunior & Big Bang

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Posted 10 November 2008 - 06:30 PM

AsianL0ve:
aha ha THANK YOU! sing then! ill do it with u! wink.gif biggrin.gif

nkp0504: NOONA! lol thnx for listening! ill make sure to tell u next time i post bc i have ur screenname now! lol

omo... i kno... sry! T___T

and thanks again! biggrin.gif


glassxslippersx3: SHARON NOONA! I MISS U! DROP OUT OF UNIVERSITY NOW! lmao im JK JK!!!!! aha ha ha ur stories always cheer me up!

thanks for listening!



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Posted 10 November 2008 - 06:44 PM

uahuahuahua, hi jimi. xPP

you have such a nice voice. *o*;;; it's very pretty and sounds very clean and soft.
and your harmonies aren't bad at all. i have to say, your voice is definitely really good for someone your age.
it's rare to see that around these days. they usually sing with breaths...like, 'huuhh(breath)vuuhhnn.'
buutt, you don't do that so that's good. smile.gif

i have to say, i would really like to hear you go a little higher?
i don't know but your voice sounds like it'd be pretty awesome if it went higher (like a whole song, not like adlibs. haha).
though you've got your vibrato (which i lack), i think you might need a little more melody.
like an 'oomph' to your singing? the hamster version has that! xD ok ok.
but yeahs. i think maybe you should sing as if you're singing it to someone?! (my criticism sucks).
you seem to emphasize a lot on your vibrato which i think is pretty much okay. it should come out naturally.
focus on singing with emotion rather than stretching the town of your voice.

now those were my lame 2cents of criticism. other than that, as just a listener, i think it's suuppeerrr good. like seriously. xD
your ballads are so good. i'd like to see you do a popular korean on. i really don't know what i have in mind but i know your korean pronunciation isn't bad so give it a try!

huhu, -off to listen to paparazzi-

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Posted 12 November 2008 - 06:59 PM

MEMENTO: thank you again lulu!!!! lol

really?! i hear much better singers around my age on soompi all te time! lol tongue.gif


like higher as in my range.... or higher as in my tone?

but thanks for you awesome advice! ill work on not over using my vibrato! lol

I WAS THINKING OF DOING BOGOSHIPDA! lol or saranghamnida! but.... idk we'll see lol

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Posted 13 November 2008 - 08:37 PM

Sounds really good, love this song!
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Posted 13 November 2008 - 10:21 PM

I think i'm gonna start stalking you now.

this was ...... Fantastic!!!
haha no words to describe it...
if you're reading this, you are lame
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Posted 13 November 2008 - 10:48 PM

It's was GOOD except for the little over vibrato and some nasal sounds on some part.. biggrin.gif
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Posted 15 November 2008 - 09:20 PM

kanbojia: lmao thnx for listening bro




szechuanie: aha ha ha really?! why thank you! smile.gif




kinchin123: lolyah i kno.... i use my vibrato alot bc my straight tones tend to drop flat alot... n r like... not steady.... its shaky.... idk how to explain it! lol

but thanks for listening!





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Posted 15 November 2008 - 09:47 PM

dude...what are you talking about? ur really good!!!

the thing is for this kind of song...straight tone is preferred more over a tone with a great amount of fast vibratto...it's cuz the song is more mellow.
also i sense a very slight nasal sound when you go into your upper register...but it's not too noticeable...just you have the correct place for resonance...but projection should just slightly be somewhere else. u had some nice riffs at the end of phrases...but sometimes they tend to get pitchy at the end...try to end them more cleaner.

but still damn...this was a really nice cover. sorry if i said anything that offended you.
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Posted 15 November 2008 - 10:21 PM

O_O i loved this song before ^^
amazing vocals! DROOL =)
maybe abit more mellow and ull be perfect... u dont have to be powerful all the time ^^
its just my opinion~ but awesome vocal!!!!

v i s i t m y b e a u t y b l o g!*
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Posted 16 November 2008 - 03:48 PM

WOW.. ur breathing..is better.. wow.. AND AHH.. ur virbrations.. ARE AWESOME... i loved it.. espcially..at the end..they harmonize..part..it was..good.. OVERALL.. GOOD.. !!

WOW.. ur breathing..is better.. wow.. AND AHH.. ur virbrations.. ARE AWESOME... i loved it.. espcially..at the end..they harmonize..part..it was..good.. OVERALL.. GOOD.. !!
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