Haru Haru My Version! My Lyrics!! Comment
#1
Posted 15 November 2008 - 11:45 PM
Now just letting you know It's like 230 in the morning here so I had to sing really quietly and on top of that I one shotted it so It's not perfect!!!
comments are great so please I beg you to leave 1
here it is oh and here are the lyrics first
Please Leave
Yeah
Finally I realize that I'm nothing without
I was wrong forgive me
Everytime I time think I can't move on
I just sit down and tell myself to be strong
It's like hell knowing I can't be with you yeah
But it's better knowing that you broke my heart yeah
Friends keep telling me that I should let you go
Them sayin' 'its over, its time to forget him, so say goodbye'
Yeah that night when I opened the door was like a nightmare never ending
Seeing you being on top of her left my mind with crazy questioning
(what the hell?) What the f.uck? What you doing with her on the day of our anniverary?
I'm a fool knowing that I believed every little thing said
You were said you were stuck in the office and gonna be late (Bull s.hit)
But you'd still be there for our dinner date (waited so long)
Waited and Waited and you never came (2 hours)
So I left the damn place before it rained
(And I found you) on the couch with a girl making out heavily practically with no clothes on
That moment I knew I had to be gone
It's so hard seeing that you've moved on
Chorus:
Can't you see the tears flowing out of my eyes
And knowing you're with her I feel like I should die
I know I'll be okay but for now it hurts anyway
That you're with her and that you're not with me
You hurt me but I hope you're happy now with someone else
As for me I'll live somehow
you're happy with her and with her you'll stay
But for me I become sadder day by day
Oh boy I cry cry
Youre my all say goodbye
One hot day walking alone I saw you with her both shoppin
You saw me but you didn't react
You acted as if nothing happened
Can't believe my eyes that you have moved on oh so quickly
When I knew when two weeks ago you were callin me 'baby'
You said you love me and you never would hurt me
Boy that was bull because now you just played me
I'm a fool to believe all of your damn lies
But I still wish you were here with me
All the times with you, now memories
I beg you to get out of my head please
Its high time that I should just let you go
But it's hard for me to do so
Chorus
What did I do so that you'd go away
Do you see my eyes crying day after day
Somehow Someway I'll forget you baby yeayh
Oh why can't I let you go?
Sometimes I wish it be easier if we both never met
Cuz then I would have never known you and I'd be happy now
Instead of me thinking of you and just cry
Oh baby please go away
Chorus
Oh boy I cry cry
You're my all Say goodbye bye
You're my love
Don't lie lie
Youre my heart
Say good bye
and the song
enjoy@!!
#3
Posted 25 November 2008 - 11:33 PM
#4
Posted 30 November 2008 - 02:23 PM
The chorus is really good.
And the oh, oh, ohs at the beginning sounded cool.
I really loved it.
I think it's the best english version of Haru Haru I've listened to so far.
#6
Posted 30 November 2008 - 03:11 PM
panda you totally made my day!!!!!!!!
#7
Posted 30 November 2008 - 04:20 PM
are you the type who talks without taking a breath ?
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#9
Posted 30 November 2008 - 07:56 PM
i think i heard it too.
my purpose it to make you feel LOVEDDDD <3
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#11
Posted 01 December 2008 - 08:40 AM
#12
Posted 01 December 2008 - 12:18 PM
A bit more emotions at singing parts would've been great...
that's the only complaint ^__^
but it's damn good for a one-shot <3
#13
Posted 01 December 2008 - 12:52 PM
Especially the chorus.
They fit so well.
I tried to write lyrics for this and phailed! D:
Good job!! because you wrote them so well!
#14
Posted 01 December 2008 - 03:13 PM
#15
Posted 01 December 2008 - 11:45 PM
gess not! lol sry!
amazing job!
wow intense......... aha ha ha
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#16
Posted 02 December 2008 - 04:53 PM
#17
Posted 02 December 2008 - 05:14 PM
Jeez~ you really make awesome lyrics.
#18
Posted 02 December 2008 - 05:27 PM
The only gripe I have with this is how some of the words don't quite "fit" in... Hard to explain.
"But for me I become sadder day by day" <- In that line for example, something doesn't quite sound right? There's a few parts like this.
I'm amazed at the rap parts though - a lot of rhymed, even. o_O;




























