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#1 User is offline   JaeMinluvr85 

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Posted 15 November 2008 - 11:45 PM

Hey guys I want you guys to hear the English version I made!!!

Now just letting you know It's like 230 in the morning here so I had to sing really quietly and on top of that I one shotted it so It's not perfect!!!


comments are great so please I beg you to leave 1

here it is oh and here are the lyrics first

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Finally I realize that I'm nothing without
I was wrong forgive me

Everytime I time think I can't move on
I just sit down and tell myself to be strong
It's like hell knowing I can't be with you yeah
But it's better knowing that you broke my heart yeah

Friends keep telling me that I should let you go
Them sayin' 'its over, its time to forget him, so say goodbye'
Yeah that night when I opened the door was like a nightmare never ending
Seeing you being on top of her left my mind with crazy questioning
(what the hell?) What the f.uck? What you doing with her on the day of our anniverary?
I'm a fool knowing that I believed every little thing said

You were said you were stuck in the office and gonna be late (Bull s.hit)
But you'd still be there for our dinner date (waited so long)
Waited and Waited and you never came (2 hours)
So I left the damn place before it rained

(And I found you) on the couch with a girl making out heavily practically with no clothes on
That moment I knew I had to be gone
It's so hard seeing that you've moved on

Chorus:
Can't you see the tears flowing out of my eyes
And knowing you're with her I feel like I should die
I know I'll be okay but for now it hurts anyway
That you're with her and that you're not with me
You hurt me but I hope you're happy now with someone else
As for me I'll live somehow
you're happy with her and with her you'll stay
But for me I become sadder day by day

Oh boy I cry cry
Youre my all say goodbye

One hot day walking alone I saw you with her both shoppin
You saw me but you didn't react
You acted as if nothing happened
Can't believe my eyes that you have moved on oh so quickly
When I knew when two weeks ago you were callin me 'baby'

You said you love me and you never would hurt me
Boy that was bull because now you just played me
I'm a fool to believe all of your damn lies
But I still wish you were here with me

All the times with you, now memories
I beg you to get out of my head please
Its high time that I should just let you go
But it's hard for me to do so

Chorus


What did I do so that you'd go away
Do you see my eyes crying day after day
Somehow Someway I'll forget you baby yeayh
Oh why can't I let you go?

Sometimes I wish it be easier if we both never met
Cuz then I would have never known you and I'd be happy now
Instead of me thinking of you and just cry
Oh baby please go away

Chorus

Oh boy I cry cry
You're my all Say goodbye bye
You're my love
Don't lie lie
Youre my heart
Say good bye



and the song


enjoy@!!
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Posted 16 November 2008 - 12:45 AM

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Posted 25 November 2008 - 11:33 PM

i actually really really like the lyrics, it fits so well =D and mixing was pretty decent =] tho like u said since u recorded late at night AND one-shotted it, there could've been more emotions, but otherwise I REALLY LIKED IT! =]
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Posted 30 November 2008 - 02:23 PM

I likey.
The chorus is really good.
And the oh, oh, ohs at the beginning sounded cool.
I really loved it.
I think it's the best english version of Haru Haru I've listened to so far.
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Posted 30 November 2008 - 02:36 PM

CHRISTINA. You are amazing.
I've already heard it I think, when you played it on skype once.
But I thought I'd comment here anyway...
To make you look more popular with more comments haha.

But really, amazing stuff =]
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Posted 30 November 2008 - 03:11 PM

thnk you guys


panda you totally made my day!!!!!!!!
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Posted 30 November 2008 - 04:20 PM

nice singing.
are you the type who talks without taking a breath ?
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Posted 30 November 2008 - 07:50 PM

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Posted 30 November 2008 - 07:56 PM

sexy mama christina FTW!
i think i heard it too.
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Posted 01 December 2008 - 12:27 AM

not bad, i like the lyrics. it flows pretty well


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Posted 01 December 2008 - 08:40 AM

Look you're more popular than me now ROFL ohmy.gif hahaha
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Posted 01 December 2008 - 12:18 PM

Yeeeha xD~ like it...
A bit more emotions at singing parts would've been great...
that's the only complaint ^__^
but it's damn good for a one-shot <3

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Posted 01 December 2008 - 12:52 PM

I really liked these lyrics.
Especially the chorus.
They fit so well.
I tried to write lyrics for this and phailed! D:
Good job!! because you wrote them so well!

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Posted 01 December 2008 - 03:13 PM

Much love for those who commented and ben no one is more popular than YOU!!!! Well maybe hannah and maybe Jooty but yeah LOL I'm not popular
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Posted 01 December 2008 - 11:45 PM

woah.... i thought i commented this already......

gess not! lol sry!

amazing job! smile.gif

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 04:53 PM

WOW! The lyrics was DEFINITELY a one-shot! I enjoyed it! I think you should post it as a one-shot too if you haven't already. It's really good. I am in love with the lyrics though some parts made me =OO. x] Buttah yeahzz, excellent work! :]
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 05:14 PM

omg great job ^ ^ I really liked your english version for lies too.

Jeez~ you really make awesome lyrics.
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Posted 02 December 2008 - 05:27 PM

That was very enjoyable to listen to. ^^ Good job.

The only gripe I have with this is how some of the words don't quite "fit" in... Hard to explain.
"But for me I become sadder day by day" <- In that line for example, something doesn't quite sound right? There's a few parts like this.

I'm amazed at the rap parts though - a lot of rhymed, even. o_O;
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Posted 07 December 2008 - 05:44 PM

i LUV dis song!^^ plus ur voice was really cute!


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