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#1 User is offline   szechuanie 

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Posted 25 November 2008 - 04:53 PM

I finally got to record something!

Hard to believe but it's my very first solo cover and I'll dedicate it to Michael aka 시아준수. You all should know he's the sexiest man alive!!!! hahahaha

I was supposed to collab this song with Michael and Maci. It fell through and I already learned the song so I figured I'll try and record it.

so, I usually don't like singing solo songs because my voice is extremely pitchy.
I fixed that by double layering the voices but now it sounds like there's an echo.

anyway, hope you enjoy.


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#2 User is offline   Kyo Hanjin 

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Posted 25 November 2008 - 04:57 PM

me first!!!! be back to edit!!!

[edit] ok i'll be honest...this was interesting at best. especially since i hate the actual song.



PSYCHE!!!!! a.ka. jk jk ^^ but ya i actually don't like the actual song by dbsg/whoever they covered.

this was so good!!!!!! your voice is so smooth and u have such a rich tone quality!!!! love the slight vibratto you have going on at the end of phrases. u still have that soulfulness factor which adds to the emotion of the song.
damn very nice transition throughout ur registers. even though you mainly used chest voice...i can sense a bit of mix here and there, and maybe a tiny bit of head voice....very nice^^. there weren't any noticeable breaks which was good ^^.
loved the change in dynamics from 3:23-3:25.
diction was good, could've used a tiny bit more emphasis on consonants...but nothing really bad at all ^^.

overall a perfect rendition...except for that one tiny tiny miniscule pitchy part in the beginning.

thanks a lot for dedicating to me ^^. i feel so honored and happy and touched and extremely thankful. am i really more than the air you breathe?
i still can't believe u dedicated ur ever first solo cover to me ^^. even more honor there ^^.

- Ceci (szechuanie)'s #1 fan Michael Lee a.k.a. Kyo Hanjin a.k.a. 시아준수 (Xiah Junsu)
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Posted 25 November 2008 - 06:14 PM

WHY TO MICHAEL OF ALL PEOPLE DDDD:
this piece of art is too good for him! >D

OH EM GEE! I LOVE THIS SONG SO MUCH!
and you totally made me love it more ~
like it is GORGEOUS to no end.
and your voice is so frappin nice!
I'M LIKE A FLAILING MESS OF GOOO~
TT^TT *MELTS MELTS MELTS*

YOU ARE "MORE THAN THE AIR I BREATHE" ~
like i can't even express it in words.
i want to all caps this because it's THAT gorgeous.
but then all caps isn't elegant enough for it ><

I'M FRAPPING GETTING SHIVERSSSSSS TT^TT
like seriously. the feel is so nice.
and i love the bridge! like its so powerful and ALFJDSLAKJSDKGSD!
and then the last chorus!
DDSGJSLJD:SGJDK:JFSD >___________<
omg. it's full of perfect moments!

gosh, this is getting long.
i'll just fangirl... in front of my laptop...
like a crazy psycho computer nerd ><

lesson of this comment: YOU NEED TO SING MORE SOLOS!

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Posted 25 November 2008 - 07:29 PM

-Fangirls-
Great,now I'm becoming more like Jooty. >:l Not like it's a bad thing..but seriously,I'm not one to fangirl easily. HAHA.

-I love you for covering this lovely song. (MY FAV~!)
-I'm dissapointed that u did not offer me to do this collab together. (JOKING!)
-I'm gonna steal your gorgeous voice one day. XD (Like that would happen,PFT)
- -Fangirls- -Smack self- Seriously,I need to stop doing that. Ehe.

PS: I'll be waiting for your next solo. v^.^v

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~


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Posted 25 November 2008 - 07:36 PM

^
(1) what's wrong with fangirling! D:
but more importantly,
(2) WHAT'S WRONG WITH BECOMING MORE LIKE ME TT^TT

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Posted 25 November 2008 - 09:43 PM

^
(1) I dnt knw..Haha,just dat..I'm not the kind to fangirl you know. Cuz when I start I won't stop. XDDD

(2)LOL! Jooty,don't get me wrong XD It's the way you fangirl,that's all. Other than that,there's nth wrong being like you! ILY<333


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Posted 25 November 2008 - 09:46 PM

^ GUYS! stop spamming =P
But... Jooty's turned me into a fangirling person too... =O
Love you jooty <3



will be back to comment! Promise =D
cos you're just too awesome xD
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Posted 25 November 2008 - 10:24 PM

haha i don't mind the spam.... it's hilarious actually.

MichEal!!!
yeah, i know you don't like the song. It's the reason why our collab died.... which i'm very sad about btw.
but i know pitch problems are still there and I definitely thought I overdid the vibrato a lot.
But i wish my voice was smoooooooth. it just sounds very rough and edgy at times. but thanks for the lovely comments. I ignored the fluff by the way. hehe


Jooty!!!
o_O??? WoW
haha, BUT seriously don't fangirl me. There's no need to.
oh and Michael requested.... NO ORDERED ME to... haha sike!!! SIIIKE
There'll always be other songs, haha dunno if there'll be A LOT of solo songs. but i do promise more collab covers...


Quirkywee!!!
I love this song too. all their songs on their album are good.
O My... I would have loved to collab, but seriously..... I'm not worthy... haha. Seriously....
and you can definitely take my voice just as long as you give me yours...... I'll take yours any day!
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Posted 26 November 2008 - 12:54 AM

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your voice is so rich....what what what?

the harmonies sound mad good! is this like a old-school-soompier comeback?
i've never heard this song before (im not real big on tvxq) but this was just beautiful!

I HAVE A REQUEST! care to sing zhang li yin's y? i love that song <33 you'd sound so good singing it! <3333

great job!

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 03:24 AM

I'm back back back! ^^

WOW... you sounded amazing! I LOVE LOVE LOVE your voice! It's got that RnB, souful feel?
I thought the harmonies were really good! especially during the bridge!

First solo being Junsu's composed! <3 Love you for doing it haha xD

*goes to listen again while i study for my exam tomorrow....*
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Posted 26 November 2008 - 12:00 PM

dang
your voice is super sexy and smoottth~

i wanted to collab this song but dang....i think il throw it out the window now 0___0

i love it <3 i love the song, and your vocals!

fighting :0
-Ali

ps- haha i love the banter between Jooty and Quirkywee xD
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Posted 26 November 2008 - 12:06 PM

First off, FINALLY. Someone sung this song. I love this song<3.
Secondly, You sang well! I like it! Nice job! happy.gif

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 11:12 PM

Shannon...
I'm sorry Michael forced you to listen and post. haha.
but this song is from 동방신기's newest album so that may be why you're not familiar with it.
And i can try and attempt Zhang Ri Yin but her voice is so powerful and high. I don't think it'll sound good at all.


Ayaka...
THanks! thanks! thanks! hehe... I realized my singing tends to come out very RnB-ish. i dunno how it happens though. I guess it's just my style. But I hope you did well on your exam!!


Ali...
my voice is sexy? o_O?
that really is a first. haha.
But definitely collab the song! i wanna hear it. It would sound amazing, no doubt about it!!!


Priscilla...
I didn't know if a lot of people knew this song. But it really grew on me and I ended up loving it too! Thanks for listening to it!
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Posted 26 November 2008 - 11:20 PM

^ michael did not FORCE me! i listened because i wanted to! <3333

yay woots for zhang li yin! i call dibs on first to comment <3333

you amazing singer, you! you're going to sound oh-so-awesome smile.gif

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Posted 27 November 2008 - 01:29 AM

gah love this song.

and i love you too for singing it.

brb to comment! (:

back ^^ i love your voice cause its so low, perfect for ballads (in my opinion). i can never sing ballads cause i'm a bit on the nasally side >< i love your harmonies. its very well mixed and balanced, the harmonies sound like they really were supposed to be there.

you do have to work a little on the end of your phrases (especially in the beginning, some of the word lacked support) but its not really noticeable. i wished, for changmin's part (was it sung by him?) from 3:04 to 3:08 you could have used your chest voice, it would have more oomph (i think) and junsu's part at 3:24 to 3:27 could have a little more control, i don't know, that's what i think. ><

but i still love your voice, it's sexy yet soulful at the same time so what i'm trying to say is, post more solo's and i'll stalk spaz like a crazy fangirl (:


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Posted 27 November 2008 - 07:29 AM

a nice song and cute voice biggrin.gif!!!
CAn I ask something???
what record software did you use ??? I need some to record my real voice ><
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Posted 27 November 2008 - 06:05 PM

SOUNDED SO GOOD, Too bad the background was still there, however, this sounded so good, good vocals szechuanie, you held that long note nicely and the rest of it sounded really good, ^ ^ good job.
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Posted 27 November 2008 - 06:54 PM

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WOW WOW WOW!

this is SOOOO AWESOME! and ur vocal runs are *thumbs up!* smile.gif

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Posted 27 November 2008 - 09:51 PM

*sighs* you make me wanna turn lesbian...

^... ok that came out extremely wrong. but but you know wat i mean haha.
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Posted 28 November 2008 - 04:05 PM

Aww your voice is very smooth sounding! Love the little vibrattos and your emotion was pretty good ^^
Try singing more vocally strong songs. I wanna see how far your voice can go ^^
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