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[completed Collab] 넌 나의 노래 (you're My Melody) Feat. Oksusu, Quirkywee, jzsun, lovechangmin, and oasisღ

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Posted 08 December 2008 - 10:57 PM

Sorry it took so long, i blame it on the instrumental.

I finished mixing this two weeks ago but I was hoping to find a better instrumental than the vocal cut. I had no luck and I postponed the final clip waaay too long.

SO ENJOY! If i ever find a better instrumental I'll re-up it later....

volume is so uneven and loud, sorry.

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hero - oksusu
xiah - quirkywee
yunho - jzsun
micky - lovechangmin
changmin - oasisღ

Lyrics
oh yeah oh oh yeah

눈을 감으면 들려오는 소리들
noon-eul gam-eu-myeon deul-ryeo-oh-neun so-ri-deul
그대의 마음을 그대의 작은 생각들을
geu-dae-ue ma-eum-eul geu-dae-ue jak-eun saeng-gak-deul-eul

내 맘의 많은 잡음 때문에
nae mam-ue man-eun jab-eum ddae-moon-eh
듣지 못 했었나 봐 미안해 미안해
deut-ji mot haess-eot-na bwa mi-an-hae mi-an-hae


눈물의 시간이 이젠 history
noon-mool-ue si-gan-ee ee-jehn history

걱정하지마 Because
geok-jeong-ha-ji-ma Because


You're my melody 너를 연주할께
You're my melody neo-reul yeon-joo-hal-kkeh
On & On

넌 나의 노래 내 삶의 사운드트랙
neon na-ue no-rae nae salm-ue soundtrack

인생의 무댈 밝혀주는 너를 사랑해
een-saeng-ue moo-dael balg-hyeo-joo-neun neo-reul sa-rang-hae

또 불러줄래 넌 나의 노래
ddo bool-reo-jool-rae neon na-ue no-rae

I'm sorry 란 말을 하기 싫었던
i'm sorry ran mal-eul ha-gi silh-eot-deon
자존심 많았던 너무도
(yunho + xiah) 맘이 가난했던
ja-jon-shim man-at-deon neo-moo-do (yunho + xiah) mam-ee ga-nan-haet-deon

내 영혼이 말라가고 있을 때
nae young-hon-ee mal-ra-ga-go eet-seul ddae
모든게 무너질 때 내게 와줄래
mo-deun-geh moo-neo-jil ddae nae-geh wa-jool-lae


(double layer)슬픔의 시간도 노래처럼
seul-peun-ue shi-gan-do no-rae-cheo-reom
끝이 있는걸 (micky + hero) Because
kkok kkeut-ee eet-neun-geol (micky + xiah) Because

It's your love your love

내게 사랑을 들려주던
nae-geh sa-rang-eul deul-ryeo-joo-deon
그댄 나의 리듬 내 삶의 선물
geu-daen na-ue rhythm nae salm-ue seon-mool

늘 항상 곁에서 아름다운 꿈이 되어줘 (되어줘)
neul hang-sang gyeot-eh-seo ah-reum-da-oon kkoom-ee dwe-eo-jwo (dwe-eo-jwo)
또 불러줄래 넌 나의 노래
ddo bool-reo-jool-rae neon na-ue no-rae

수 없이도 많은 sad love songs
soo eobs-ee-do man-eun sad love songs
sad love songs
우릴 노래하는 것 같아도
oo-ril no-rae neun geot gat-ah-do
no no no no no


이 순간 내 곁을 지켜주는
ee soon-gan nae gyeot-eul ji-kyeo-joo-do
그댄 무엇보다 소중한걸요
geu-daen moo-eot-bo-da so-joong-han-geol-yo


oooh

눈을 감으면 들려오는 소리들
noon-eul gam-eu-myeon deul-ryeo-oh-neun so-ri-deul
그대의 마음을 이젠 불러요~
geu-dae-ue ma-eum-eul ee-jehn bool-reo-yo~


You're my melody (yeah) 너를 연주할께
You're my melody (yeah) neo-reul yeon-joo-hal-kkeh
On & On
넌 노래 내 삶의 사운드트랙
neon no-rae nae salm-ue soundtrack


인생의 무댈 밝혀주는 너를 사랑해
een-saeng-ue moo-dael balg-hyeo-joo-neun neo-reul sa-rang-hae
또 불러줄래 넌 나의 노래
(넌 나의 노래)
ddo bool-reo-jool-rae neon na-ue no-rae (neon na-ue no-rae)

It's your love your love (your love)
내게 사랑을 들려주던 (on & on & on & on)
nae geh sa-rang-eul deul-ryeo-joo-deon (on & on & on & on)
그댄 나의 리듬 내 삶의 선물 (내 삶의 선물)
geu-daen na-ue rhythm nae salm-ue seon-mool (nae salm-ue seon-mool)
늘 항상 곁에서 아름다운 꿈이 되어줘 (아름다운 꿈이 되어줘)
neul hang-sang gyeot-eh-seo ah-reum-da-oon kkoom-ee dwe-eo-jwo (ah-reum-da-oon kkoom-ee dwe-eo-jwo)
또 불러줄래 넌 나의 노래
ddo bool-reo-jool-rae neon na-ue no-rae

lt's your love your love (your love)
내게 사랑을 들려주던 (and on & on & on)
nae-geh sa-rang-eul deul-ryeo-joo-deon (and on & on & on)
그댄 나의 리듬 내 삶의 선물 (내 삶의 선물)
geu-daen na-ue rhythm nae salm-ue seon-mool
(nae salm-ue seon-mool)
늘 항상 곁에서 아름다운 꿈이 되어줘 (되어줘)
neul hang-sang gyeot-eh-seo ah-reum-da-oon kkoom-ee dwe-eo-jwo (dwe-eo-jwo)
또 불러줄래 넌 나의 노래
ddo bool-reo-jool-rae neon na-ue no-rae
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Posted 08 December 2008 - 11:19 PM

ooh, it's done (:

oksusu- <3333 your voice, you and quirkywee sound so alike sometimes i can't tell both of you apart. i loved your 'because' so pretty.

quirkywee-haven't talked to you in awhile your voice is so pretty too like woah. haha. i don't think my sentence makes sense but (: i'm so happy to be in the same collab as you ^^ i sound like a crazy fangirl but whatever, everybody is when they hear you sing. (: <3 the 'bool-reo-yo' line and the 'neon na-ue no-rae' you sang with me (:

jzsun-haven't heard you sing before cause usually you rap. ^^ gotta work on your high notes abit. i liked your 'i'm sorry ran mal-eul ha-gi silh-eot-deon ja-jon-shim man-at-deon neo-moo-do' line.

lovechangmin-i sound dead. don't talk about it ><

oasisღ -your voice is pretty too! everyone has a better voice than me >< anyway, liked your 'nae young-hon-ee mal-ra-ga-go eet-seul ddae mo-deun-geh moo-neo-jil ddae nae-geh wa-jool-lae' line. (:

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Posted 08 December 2008 - 11:22 PM

Wowwww~ I was forming a collab with this song, too XD

This one turned out awesome~ Good job, everyone!
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Posted 08 December 2008 - 11:32 PM

WOAH~!

It was put together so well.. and everyone sounds great together.. ..

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im liking it a lot!
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 12:04 AM

be back later to comment. luv ya guys!

[edit].....

oksusu noona - i freaking love your lower register...SO RICH!!!! but omg...you were amazing! such a lovely vibratto...no pitchy parts....great phrasing and diction. just...wow...also great transitioning from low to mid register. <3

quirkywee - i'm talking to you on msn right now ^^. just...complete...utter...perfection. u sound kinda similar to oksusu...but u have such great power and control.....just amazing beautiful <3

oasisღ - i think this is my first time really listening to you. i like the tone of your voice, very nice and smooth.\

lovechangmin - you did a good job on yoochun's parts...some parts were a bit awkward because your tone doesn't exactly match the song, but still u did good ^^.

jooty - ur voice type is so different from everyone else's lol. but there were a few pitchy parts and a bit of straining, but still very nice ^^. <3

szechuanie - excellent mixing...there's really not much difference in volume levels...so dont worry so much

loved this collab ^^
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 12:11 AM

Holyy crudd that was amazing!
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Post icon  Posted 09 December 2008 - 12:25 AM

YAY it's finished! ive been waiting for this haha

and its SO GOOOD!!!!!! wow~

all the harmonies were done so well ^^

congrats!!

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 01:48 AM

whoot~finally a you're my melody collab XDD and...
whoa~ its soooo good!! ^_____^ I love it<333~~ ^^ smile.gif






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Posted 09 December 2008 - 05:19 AM

HELLO SWEETIES! <3

Ceci:
i would have wanted to do this collab too =( but it was my exam period so i couldnt -.-"
But why were't you in it?! you wud've been amazing!
too bad it was vocal cut... =( all the beautiful voices got covered..
But you tried your best ceci! saranghae! ♥
you're my melodyyyyyy~♪


Ficky:
you stole my junsu =O
JUST KIDDING!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥
you wud've totally pawned me anyways...
pretty voice as usual! my pretty team!
you're my melody sweetie! <3
AND I LOVE YOUR 'BECAUSE'!

Oksusu unni:
you sounded really nice! i loved your adlibs and the "because" was ♥!
Loved your voice! =D

Jooty:
awww my jooty is growing up <3
i know you tried your best in the high part since your voice range is in the lower side, but i thought u did great anyways! your verses were sexy! too bad there was no sexy sexy raps!
you're also my melody sexy! <3
♥♥♥♥♥♥

oasisღ:
i shud learn more ppl's names and make more friends xD
you have such a sweet voice! Nice job! ^^

lovechangmin:
what are you talking abt?! you did pretty well yourself~
you were able to stay on pitch and everything =D


Maybe it's bcos it's a vocal cut? but i guess if there was more energy? it wud've been even better~
But loved it anyways!!

why do i always write so much when i comment! HAHHAHAHA
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 05:37 AM

YAY! It's outtt.

This collab is LOVE<3333
lovechangmin Lol,we sound alike?
You kidding? Oksusu Unni has a better voice than mine! Seriously.
And TQ!

I'm so happy to be in this collab!
We did great,right girls?!


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Posted 09 December 2008 - 06:11 AM

oksusu: i like your voice and the way you sing.. The first part was well done, it was so low! XD
quirkywee: I like u as Junsu! Hahaha.. I love your voice!
jzsun: you make a very good Yunho.. XD
lovechangmin: too bad YooChun didn't get a lot of parts compared to the others..
oasisღ: Was something wrong with the microphone? It was still good though..

I really loved the parts where one sings the high part and the other sings the low part..
That sounded so good! >.<
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Posted 09 December 2008 - 06:17 AM

Truthfully, i havent heard this song. im ashamed to call myself a cassie. *hides*

oksusu, i LOVE your voice. But it would be better if you used a better mike.. its like.. making your voice.. not.. clear XD
quirkywee, your silent stalker is here ph34r.gif

I love the song~~~
i dont really recognize all of your voices.. but i have a sharp ear.
just a random question.. the part when.. quirkywee sang 되어줘.. it sounds the same like the because part.. around 1:30, the higher note.
isnt that her singing the because part? i heard the original ver and it was junsu who sang the higher note..
correct me if im wrong ^^ ;;

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 08:39 AM

yaaa, well for that part... it sounded like hero in the original. so thats why i put it as hero's part

BUT... when i was mixing i got three parts. oksusu, quirkywee, and lovechangmin...
I didn't bother to look it up and I just put in Quirkywee in by mistake.

so I made the changes to the lyrics.

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 11:55 AM

laugh.gif w00t.gif wow!! that was amazing!! I love it ~
everyone did such a good job, and the mixing was great!
wah..~ I can't stop listening to it...


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Posted 09 December 2008 - 02:48 PM

YAY IT'S FINALLY OUT~!
everyone sounds awesome. and mixing is awesome o_o
too bad it's a vocal cut TT^TT

ficky and oksusu stood out for me.
especially oksusu in the beginning.
she's SO amazing! O__________O!
but then i really liked sarah and lovechangmin's voices too <3
just a different feel than ficky's and oksusu's...
they sound more mature, while yall sound super cute and pretty ~

T____________T OMG MY PARTS TURNED OUT SO BAD!
i blame it on the headset... like i wanted to sing louder...
but but, my headset couldn't take it.
so i had to like hold back, so the volume could be lower D:
hence the sounding like i was struggling?
SORRY EVERYONE >___________<;;

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 03:35 PM

oksusu, I'm always impressed with your voice. You have such a nice tone, and you sound gorgeous, always.

Quirkywee, I love love love your vibrato. Your voice is beautiful, and fits Xiah's part really nicely. You sound so mature!

jzsun, you sound so clear. I want to hear you sing more! 8)

lovechangmin, you have a smooth and pretty voice. I like it. ^^

I sound a little muffled. I should get a new mic or something. D:

ceci, thanks so much for hosting this collab, and your mixing is amazing! :3
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 05:14 PM

You're welcome!!!

This collab was so much FUN!!!!

Everyone did such a great job!
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Posted 10 December 2008 - 06:31 PM

hero - oksusu
xiah - quirkywee
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Posted 11 December 2008 - 01:47 AM

sorry if I sounded muffled. it's not the mic, it's most likely me. I was working off a cold when I sang this. I was working hard so it wouldn't show...but I guess it still did.

collab turned out great, glad to be able to be a part of it. quirkywee I love your voice. It's so pretty. Will you do a collab with me? happy.gif

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Posted 11 December 2008 - 10:10 AM

Woahh I really like how the final clip turned out =D
Yaay for u guys ^^

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