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#1 User is offline   Tone 

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Posted 01 January 2009 - 06:38 AM

everyone know when your in love you tend to write some cheesey stuff! haha. share your poems you've written about your past/current love! :]

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I HAVE A QUESTION

ya ever love someone who doesn't feel the same?
you hearing people saying "love is happiness" yet all you feel is pain
you wanna be sheltered cause you never felt a love hot enough to melt ya
and she never held ya in the rain under her umbrella, still gotta maintain
this heartbroken, not who she chosen
still have high hopes in, me and her
cause i know the dude she loves doesn't see what i see in her
that ------ a ----, a prick
i'll whip his ------- --- if i find out where he lives
but nah i don't wanna get violent
conversations never get silent
we the perfect balance
i'll walk miles for her smile, is like watching the sun rising
...its so beautiful, you're so beautiful
the more we talk, the more we connect
actually the more we connect, the more i regret
cause its only me falling
and it might not seem important
but we have chemistry
i'm chained to your melody
i'll give til i can't give enough
you can love him if u want but i'm not giving up
quote on quote "i can't sing but for you i'll hit a note"
"can't write but for you i'll write a poem"
"not a comedian but for your laughter, i'll make a joke"
but my feelings are far from a joke, just hope that you know
yours truly, ya boy tone

this verse was written for a girl who shall remain anonymous. however, i hate how i fall for someone so easily. only if feelings and emotions are controllable; that way i would be able to prevent it from happening, and to save myself from being rejected. we all have to learn when to give up sooner or later. *sigh* funny knowing what i can't have, only makes me want it much more.

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Posted 01 January 2009 - 11:17 AM

http://psyc0tikdream.deviantart.com/art/Lo...ystery-90474006
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Posted 01 January 2009 - 11:24 AM

Someone wrote me a poem, and I thought it was really sweet.
(I hope it's okay to post this, if not i shall edit my post ^^)



Many nights have I lain in bed,
Thinking, hoping and grieving in my head.
Even while knowing with your standards I could not compete,
A mere glimpse of you makes my heart skip a beat.
The horrifying thought of another guy whisking you away,
Would be enough to keep me awake on the flight to Norway.
Only now did I realize I had fallen in love,
And so this poem I decided to compose,
To ask you for your hand,
Not for marriage yet but to be my girlfriend.


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Posted 01 January 2009 - 03:04 PM

QUOTE (` T O K Y O @ Jan 1 2009, 11:24 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Someone wrote me a poem, and I thought it was really sweet.
(I hope it's okay to post this, if not i shall edit my post ^^)



Many nights have I lain in bed,
Thinking, hoping and grieving in my head.
Even while knowing with your standards I could not compete,
A mere glimpse of you makes my heart skip a beat.
The horrifying thought of another guy whisking you away,
Would be enough to keep me awake on the flight to Norway.
Only now did I realize I had fallen in love,
And so this poem I decided to compose,
To ask you for your hand,
Not for marriage yet but to be my girlfriend.


Thats cute. I like it. although... it's kind of sad.

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Posted 01 January 2009 - 03:25 PM

I wrote this on the fly, just now.

I love you
Everything yo do
I want to do it to
With you
OOOOHHHH YEAHHHH!
Baby,
What you gonna do?

Definitely gonna use that one day.
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Posted 01 January 2009 - 03:26 PM

QUOTE (Nikana @ Jan 1 2009, 06:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thats cute. I like it. although... it's kind of sad.

yeah, i got this when i blocked him on msn. sweatingbullets.gif
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Posted 01 January 2009 - 04:52 PM

I did write love poems to an ex, for a college class.

The teacher loved them and ended up reading them to the class. lol. 300 people were exposed to my deepest feelings >_>;
Not going to post them here... but I hope others have more courage than me.


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Posted 01 January 2009 - 10:13 PM

List of Poems
My list of love poems is in the link above feel free to read any you'd like. they are all about love and the hurt it's caused.

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Posted 01 January 2009 - 11:07 PM

You are the sun that brightens my rainy days,
You are the win that pushes my sail,
Loving you forever and always,
You are my everything.
Wise words: To know someone else you must first know yourself.
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 12:12 AM

haha sounds like my game here[:
i have a lot..but here's the one i got published in 04

Love's Questions

Am I just too shy?
Or I just don't wanna try?
When I see you before me,
Worries chain me from setting free.
Losing my chance, I would sigh,
Too afraid of "You and I."
Regrets and emptiness fill this soul.
Where's that missing piece to my whole?

What if I take that risk?
Will you comply to my wish?
Can I dream of you in my Myth,
Where we will ride the magic carpet,
And frolick through mystical lands uncharted?
Would I wake up to see the same lovely lady,
Who will share my days bright or shady?
Would I see through your beauty,
And find a loveable personality?

Which is right? My mind? or my heart?
Not knowing any answers, tears me apart.

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ihigh[compose my ending]
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 02:14 AM

i love the taste of you,
it gives me a jolt of energy,
it gives me life.
it cools my body
it calms my beating heart

i feel you on my lips,
i feel you going down,
down, and down.

i love the taste of you,
you're sweeter than chocolate,
chocolate may melt,
but you,
your taste just consumes my body.

i love the taste of you,
i love the taste of you,
i love the taste of.....














AQUAFINA WATER!!!!!
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 04:46 AM

I first started writing poetry because there was this girl I had a big crush on in the 7th grade who I knew liked poetry. So I'd write three or fours poems a day, and give them to her at the end of the school day. It still embarrasses me slightly to think about it. tongue.gif
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 06:55 AM

QUOTE (` T O K Y O @ Jan 1 2009, 02:24 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Someone wrote me a poem, and I thought it was really sweet.
(I hope it's okay to post this, if not i shall edit my post ^^)


yeah thats a nice poem. did he get any lucky?

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Posted 02 January 2009 - 06:59 AM

You look like a tabby cat,
And yes it's an insult, you're pretty fat.

Romantic,
I know. I give up on this.
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Posted 02 January 2009 - 07:55 AM

Ok, I wrote this last year about this guy I fell for. He's a doodyhead who broke my heart so I kinda feel stupid now so please don't laugh!



The heavens are far away apart from when you are near,
My heart beat quickens and I am overcome by wave upon wave of longing,
Desire is a poor mans poison and love is a rich mans food,
I have yet to discover who you are to me,
I no longer know who I am, only what you do to me,
The sharp clear notes of song seem to entice me,
You are my song,
A glimmer in a gem throws me up to new planes,
Your life so unpolished but so priceless,
My life is worth nothing in comparison,
Yet a single glance will make my fractured hopes re-align,
You are my plague,
You consume me and keep me awake wondering what could be,
A kiss, a touch, your voice whispering my name……


~YN

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Posted 02 January 2009 - 09:41 AM

QUOTE (` T O K Y O @ Jan 1 2009, 01:24 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Someone wrote me a poem, and I thought it was really sweet.
(I hope it's okay to post this, if not i shall edit my post ^^)



Many nights have I lain in bed,
Thinking, hoping and grieving in my head.
Even while knowing with your standards I could not compete,
A mere glimpse of you makes my heart skip a beat.
The horrifying thought of another guy whisking you away,
Would be enough to keep me awake on the flight to Norway.
Only now did I realize I had fallen in love,
And so this poem I decided to compose,
To ask you for your hand,
Not for marriage yet but to be my girlfriend.

That's super cute, i'm so jealous x.x

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Desire is a poor mans poison and love is a rich mans food

I really like this part! Its really captivating but so sad at the same time.

I was never very poetic, therefore i never wrote poems about my love...
i usually just read a bunch of heartbroken quotes that usually makes me cry
and super depressed.

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Posted 02 January 2009 - 11:15 PM

QUOTE (princesspoppy @ Jan 2 2009, 05:14 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
i love the taste of you,
it gives me a jolt of energy,
it gives me life.
it cools my body
it calms my beating heart

i feel you on my lips,
i feel you going down,
down, and down.

i love the taste of you,
you're sweeter than chocolate,
chocolate may melt,
but you,
your taste just consumes my body.

i love the taste of you,
i love the taste of you,
i love the taste of.....














AQUAFINA WATER!!!!!



WOOOOOORD!
i never wrote poems for my actual bfs but i wrote them for other people to give to their s/o's XD

i'll love you today, i'll love you tomorrow
you are my something you are my sorrow...
something something joy and strife
you are my love, you are my life mellow.gif chyeah. skills : )
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Posted 03 January 2009 - 12:44 AM

Roses are red, violets are blue.
I am so hot, and maybe so are you.


This could have contributed a bit to why I stayed single forever.
*Insert some wise words here*
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Posted 03 January 2009 - 01:08 PM

one oh one three
why're you the only thing i see
think bout you day and night
with you, everything just feels so right
when it all started, who knew what to expect
i thought you were perfect, my guess was correct
dang, a girl so special like you
for you sarah, what wouldn't i do?
if i'm ever needed yu know where to call
i'll be there to catch you whenever you fall
i hope you know that one thing is true
(her name here), i love you.

the one oh one three = 10.13 our est. date
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Posted 03 January 2009 - 03:53 PM

QUOTE (Flicksityy @ Jan 2 2009, 06:59 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You look like a tabby cat,
And yes it's an insult, you're pretty fat.

Romantic,
I know. I give up on this.


I love this one
Beautiful women may make men swoon and other women will tremble but true love always keep the faith.
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