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Mirotic (my English Remix)

#1 User is offline   Mellerz 

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Posted 03 January 2009 - 11:48 PM

Now, this is my kinda song ^__^
I think this was the funnest by far. Again, I'm not a mixer.
That's why the ending sounds like a sure fire mess. LOL
I scared my mom when I was recording Changmin's part


Me: "YEAHHHHHHHHHH. WOWWW!"
-knock on the door-
Mom: "Are you okay? You scared me"

-LMAOOO!




Mirotic (english remix)
^ C L I C K ^


i told you once
i told you twice
that i'm known as a heartbreaker
but you told me
my reputation wouldn't last very long
but look atcha now
you were wrong, whoa

i'm pulling you in
i'm taking you down
sucking you in like an ocean
i'm breaking my rules again
i guess i'll remain the same
hate to say it though
i told you so, whoa

you know you want me
act like i want you
act like i love you
just cause i choose to
i got you under my skin
you know you want me
act like i want you
act like i need you
just cause i want to
i got you under my skin


it happened once
it happened twice
but you act like it was nothing
as if under a spell
deeply hypnotized and i can tell
it ain't so easy
to break free, whoa

you're buying me rings
material things
from gold to diamonds to crystals
you're right in the palm of my hand
a typical crying man
you see there's no way out,
no way out, whoa

you know you want me
act like i want you
act like i love you
just cause i choose to
i got you under my skin
you know you want me
act like i want you
act like i need you
just cause i want to
i got you under skin


with the first kiss, my lips
are a poisonous touch, which you can't get enough
with the last kiss, reminisc
from the crush that you had turning love into lust
yeah, keep denying if you want
you know you got it, yeahhhhhhh WHOA
come on, come on ~ come on, come on
i got you under my skin

you know you can't
even try to get me off your mind
you know you said
that you couldn't seem to leave my side
i got you under my skin
my devil's ride
is a simple effection known to all
my devil eyes
telling you that my love's suicidal
i got you under my skin

you know you want me
act like i want you
act like i love you
just cause i choose you to
i got you under my skin
you know you want me
act like i want you
act like i need you
just cause i want to
i got you under skin




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#2 User is offline   M3lly 

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Posted 04 January 2009 - 12:16 AM

Great job with the English lyrics buddy!
Haha i like how you sang it your own way too, i think it sounded great =D
LOL and that thing about your mom coming in while you were singing Changmin's part was funny!! Haha xD

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Posted 04 January 2009 - 01:48 AM

It4cH1 - technique wise it sounds really good. i love the quality of your voice. i would work on your pitch, it sounds like you're singing the song in the wrong key. :[... but really i like your technique.

It4ch1's gf - i agree with aaron. i also really love your voice and technique. it could sound so much better. but i dont think its that you can't reach the notes. it does sound like you're singing in the wrong key. in most parts completely off pitch. train your ears to listen to the notes so you can hit them right. just fix that and you'd sound amazing ;]


Please feel free to pm or comment about collabing ;) i dont bite.
I also noobishly mix. So if you need someone to mix, i'll be happy to help out.

Sorry bout that pic guys... someone went onto my account... and put that there...
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Posted 06 January 2009 - 04:40 PM

cute cute cuteee lyrics booO!!
haha i still crack up reading when you're mom came in .
i love the rap parttt hahaha
i wanna get it as my ringtone...... when i get my phone back LOL!!!
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Posted 08 January 2009 - 10:37 PM

You have a great voice.. and your lyrics are so beautiful
I love the rap... your attitude was right-on!!!!!


ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....
BUT some advice..

if you change the key of the song when you record,, you have to mix it to the song with the new key.. and not to the original.....
if you're reading this, you are lame
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Posted 09 January 2009 - 02:32 AM

That's pretty cool happy.gif
But, some of the parts are really out of tune D:
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