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[completed Collab] Tvxq - 忘れないで (wasurenaide) *dl Link Updated* feat. Oksusu, oasisღ, Ariah`, szechuanie, nx_kiiwii74

#1 User is offline   szechuanie 

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Posted 05 February 2009 - 09:42 PM

PHEW!
THANKS TO:
the lovely cast members: Oksusu, oasisღ, Ariah`, and nx_kiiwii74 for agreeing to take part in this collab.
I LOVE HOW THIS COLLAB CAME OUT and its all thanks to your beautiful voices!!!!


The song isn't available for download yet BECAUSE I'm having computer problems. My headphone jack doesn't work. The volume on the track is probably all messed up.
I'll make download available when I can make the final changes.


Fixed the problem!!! re-uploaded completed song!!!


Jaejoong Oksusu

Changmin oasisღ
Junsu Ariah`
Yunho szechuanie
Micky nx_kiiwii74

ベッドに座って 君のことを考えていた
beddo ni suwatte kimi no koto wo kangaeteita
逢えなくてもいい
aena kute moii
逢いたいこの気持ちだけでいいから
aitai kono kimochi dakede iikara


強く残っている記憶 
tsuyoku no kotte iru kioku (changmin+junsu)
君からの短いメッセージが (メッセージが)
kimi kara no mijikai messeji ga (messeji ga)
切なく胸締めつけるけど 
setsunaku muneshi metsukeru kedo
永久の幸せ僕が
守り続けたい
towa no shiawase boku ga mamori tsuzuketai (changmin + yunho)

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風になってそっと包みたい (micky = harmony)
kaze ni natte sotto tsutsumitai
君がいる世界にすぐ飛んで行きたい
kimi ga iru sekaini sugutonde yukitai
逢いたくても逢いたくても 
aitakutemo aitakutemo
待ってるから
matte rukara
だ忘れないで
tada wasurenaide

*

いつもの歩道に
Itsumono hodouni
君の影を感じていた
kimi no kage wo kanjiteita
静かに瞳を閉じ祈る
shizukani mewo toji ino ru
いつまでも消えないように
itsumademo kienai youni

深く傷ついていたこと 
Fukaku kizutsuite itakoto (micky + changmin)
気付かせず笑っていた君に
(君に)
kizu kasezu waratte ita kimi ni (kimi ni)
(oooh) (oooh)
ずっと大切にするから
zutto taisetsu nisurukara
叫び続ける ありふれた言葉でも
sakebi tsuzukeru arifureta kotoba demo
(micky + yunho)
(oooh)

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風になってそっと包みたい (Yunho = harmony)
kaze ni natte sotto tsutsumitai
君がいる世界にすぐ飛んで行きたい
kimi ga iru sekaini sugutonde yukitai
逢いたくても逢いたくても 
aitakutemo aitakutemo
待ってるから
matte rukara
だ忘れないで
tada wasurenaide

**

君に触れた夜
kimi ni fureta yoru
壊れてしまう ほどに
kowa reteshimau hodoni
漂う香りに また想いが募る Baby
tada you kaori ni mata omoi gatsu no ru baby

いつまでも果てないように
itsumademo hatenai youni
もっと強く繋いだ手
motto tsuyoku tsunaidate
離れないように
hanarenai youni
(oh)

風になってそっと包みたい 
kaze ni natte sotto tsutsumitai
君がいる世界にすぐ飛んで行きたい
kimi ga iru sekaini sugutonde yukitai
逢いたくても逢いたくても 
aitakutemo aitakutemo
待ってるから
matte rukara
待ってるから
matte rukara

(ooooh yeah yeah oooo ooooooh)

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風になってそっと包みたい (Changmin = harmony)
kaze ni natte sotto tsutsumitai
君がいる世界に すぐ飛んでいきたい
kimi ga iru sekaini tsugutonde ikitai
逢いたくても逢いたくても
aitakutemo aitakutemo
待ってるから
matte rukara
ただ忘れないで
tada wasurenaide

(oooooooh yeah)
ここにいるよ 忘れないで
kokoni iru yo wasurenaide

***
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Posted 05 February 2009 - 09:43 PM

BECAUSE I STALK YOU CECI, I'M FIRST. smile.gif

v no you don't. i'm not awesome enough to be stalked. )': I'LL ALWAYS BE THE ONE STALKING YOU.
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Posted 05 February 2009 - 09:45 PM

I STALK SARAH!

2nd!!
haha

GAH!!

I had to sing my part an octave higher... YUNHO is too low!
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Posted 05 February 2009 - 10:05 PM

oah yea i hear the volume-issues. i'll come back & edit/be more detailed when it's fixed xDD; tho i jus wanna say:
oksusu, oasisღ, Ariah`, szechuanie ya'll owned as usual!

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Posted 05 February 2009 - 10:35 PM

Oooo when I saw the cast for this collab I was really excited because you're all great singers. But along with my excitement came the highest of expectations.....

oksusu - At the beginning it seemed like you were struggling at the low notes...and it was sounding kind of throaty and pitchy. At the higher parts though...your tone brightened a lot so it sounded a lot better, but your technique seemed to be kind of lacking. The phrases weren't sustained very well and they didn't flow consistently. Diction was kind of unclear, sometimes slurred or in a more mumbling state. All of this did not add to your vocal expression or tone quality, which sounded less full than before, still really nice though. I really apologize for sounding so harsh...but it's just I expected so much from you in consideration of your past recordings. Of course this could also be a matter of circumstances like you were ill or something like that.

oasisღ - I think you added a really tender quality to the song with the sweet inflection that you put upon your voice. It was almost verging upon the point of emotional...it just needed that extra expression added to it. But still the way you sustained the end of your phrases was well done, albeit a little shaky and slightly pitchy...but it did help with that emotional factor. I just really wish you would've added more power to the parts that required it like during the bridge part because it sounded kind of weak and didn't abide by the dynamics of the song. It sounded really sweet though. Also nice harmonizing in the final chorus, but there was a very slight dissonance there, but not too noticeable. Good job ^^.

Ariah' - Your control during this song was excellent. You had excellent attention to dynamics and phrasing was well done, you went through them smoothly and sustained them appropriately. Also your voice had a real feminine quality that was different from the other girls that definitely aided your vocal expression. Diction was fine and your distinct tone was a pleasure to listen to. Also your transitioning between registers was really well done. I really don't much negative things to say except to have a little bit more breath support, especially during the chorus because phrasing there becomes a little more complicated. But still overall a very impressive performance.

szechuanie - First of all, your mixing wasn't bad, I could hardly notice the volume issues, except maybe at the bridge, but it's really not too big of a deal. Now vocals....it's a shame you only had that one small part. But it's usually more about quality than quantity and there was definitely high quality to your part. It's different from what you usually do because you usually have that rich soulful factor. In this case however, you held back and made it almost fragile sounding which was interesting to hear. You had a very nice tone to your voice, albeit brighter than usual, but it was still sweet and had a nice vibratto. Diction was slightly sloppy because I heard a few slurrs here and there, but they weren't really noticeable. It did slightly affect your phrasing though because it didn't flow as well, but it was really minor. Your harmony line was really quiet though...but from what I heard, it seems to be right. Nice job ^^.

nx_kiiwii74 - I noticed that for your solo part in the 2nd verse, you adopted a deeper and richer tone to your voice. This allowed you to give off a soulful vibe which added a lot to your vocal expression. However I noticed that as the song progressed the soulful vibe became less and less prominent and it started to sound kind of emotionless. This was especially evident in the bridge where the vocalist should attain a more powerful feel, and you kind of didn't pull it off and it was slightly pitchy in the middle of phrases. I think it's partially cause you didn't have enough breath support to carry you through the phrases, but the suspensions at the end were done well. Also your transitioning between registers was pretty good. Overall you did well by having a nice dark tone to your voice along with a subtle vibratto.

Overall this collab was well done. I apologize if I offended anyone with my critiques.
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Posted 07 February 2009 - 10:26 AM

nx_kiiwii74
hehe... I KNOW!!! don't worry. It's all fixed and hopefully it sounds better.

Michael
your essay was waaaaaaaaaaaay too long. but yea my parts were in an uncomfortable range. too high in my head voice and too low in my chest voice. It's a no win situation.
thanks for your comments.
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Posted 07 February 2009 - 02:45 PM

HOLY SHIZZ THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL <3
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Posted 07 February 2009 - 03:11 PM

yay ok ~

oksusu -- i love how you put emotion every time you sing, & how your strong vibratto sets you apart ^^ sure the beginning was kinda throaty but ack its really low so its not yo fault, 'sides you totally made it up in the chorus anyway hehe
oasisღ -- aaawwww your voice is soooo sweet and you sound like such a sweet person ;o; i do notice that you're real consistent when you're singing, so i suggest a little more expression? i dunno, i didnt do such a good job of that in this song so i shouldnt be one to talk *facepalm*
Ariah` -- theres somethin about your voice that sounds really sharp-like a knife! thats a good thing tho, its recognizable. you only sang the choruses but you pwned them ahaha, and the harmonies as well :]
szechuanie -- oah your voice has such a nice airy quality when you sing high! i actually really liked how you sounded when you went one octave up in the second verse -- sounds very loving ^^
myself -- hm i need to work on singing these slow sorta stuff.. i do sound bored lol. rawrr mellow balladddss grrrr....

@ jzsun - lol!! XD; thankies! i am honored to work with this cast, truly ^^
@ Kyo Hanjin - i love your essay haha! 8DD thank you thank you for the critique, i'll definitely take everything into account <3
@ kimchi hana - ;o; <3
@ SUPAHKOO!, lccyn - thank yous <3
@ bands182 - ahah srsly, what flocking?? this is my first collab with these four lol xD;;; anyway thank you!!

yeah overall ya'll rocked! great collab great collab cool.gif

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Posted 07 February 2009 - 07:13 PM

My jaw just dropped to the floor. DDDDDDDD:

Oksusu, yourparts were at a very low range, but deng. It still sounded amazing.
Every time I listen to your recordings, I fall in love with your voice, hahaha.

oasisღ, I've been fan girling over you ever since we collabed together.
Your voice is very sweet and it your singing seems to improve every time I hear it. :D

Ariah`, Junsu should have gotten some more parts in this song! :P
The way you sang "aitakutemo" in the bridge was my favorite part.
Well, the bridge was my whole favorite part. It was perfect! <3

szechuanie, hahaha, tell me about it. Yunho's parts are not possible as a female. D:
But I thought it was better than if you would have sang it in the original pitch. Or key. Or whatever it is.
I liked the bright tone, although I remember your voice being more deeper? Darker? Hahaha, I don't know.

nx_kiiwii74, did I ever tell you that I love your voice? :o I love it.
Your voice leaves me speechless. I can't say anymore, hahaha. The end. :D


You ladies should collab more often. This was beautifully done. :D


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Posted 07 February 2009 - 10:25 PM

I LOVEE ITTT XDD. At first it was a bit shaky though, but seriously this is like o_o.. the best! LOL.
All of your voice are so prettyyy~~~!!!

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 01:52 AM

Awesome!

Ariah did a great job for junsu's part.

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Posted 08 February 2009 - 02:38 PM

ohmygosh
such a pro cast 0_0
i agreed with JZ, why do all pro people FLOCK TOGETHER?!
leaves me all alone T_T

love the harmonies

you guys all did such a good job!!

ps- ohmygosh ariah 0_0
This was one of my favourite parts of your singing
aitakutemo aitakutemo
待ってるから
matte rukara
待ってるから
matte rukara
(ooooh yeah yeah oooo ooooooh)

plus the adlib at the end xD

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Posted 09 February 2009 - 07:19 PM

jooty!!!
best compliment ever from THE MC JZ!!
thanks.. hehehe

nx_kiiwii74

bah... my parts sounded a little shaky. BUT i loved yours. and your harmony!! beautiful!!

kimchi hana
oooh I KNOW.. i had a clip of the original and the higher octave. I just decided to put the higher one. but i was debating for the longest time. Now i think I should change it to the LOWER one. hmmm I just didn't know which one would sound better.

SUPAHKOO!
THANKS FOR LISTENING AND COMMENTING!!!!!!


lccyn
I LOVE ARIAH's parts. SIGH. so jealous.

Ali
I agree... those were my favorite Ariah parts too. so flow-y and smooth..



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