[krstarjr]

Ok, so my first "What Do You Think Of My Voice?" post wasn't exactly how I expected it to be, but
it let me see(or hear in this case) what I was doing wrong and fix and improve it. So it's been about a
month, and I want to see how I'm progressing, so I've posted up a part of a song again to see what you think about it...
Hopefully I improved??
This time I recorded a really addicting song recently~ Davichi's 8282
And it's an accapella again..No Music..sry

Things I've been working on: -emotion, -singing from the diaphragm, -tone/range(still need help w/),
-lung capacity, -finding right song choice that fits me, -recording more naturally~~

I posted 3 clips b/c I couldn't decide which one was better, so I guess you could pick anyone to listen first
In the clips I messed up some words cuz I tend to get nervous while recording...but not so much live~(I know weird)

So here are the clips:
8282 #1
8282 #2
8282 #3

Please give feedback for a girl who is very willing to work hard to get better~!!!

[Eider]

1- Why are you always sing on head? It's a bit...unpleasant to hear you sing only head, specially if it's a song that it's all about CHEST. Your head register isn't bad tho, it's quite steady but it's weak for a song like this, this song is meant to be powerful, i hear nothing like that.
2- Acapella isn't good to show your improvement cuz you do as pleases, you even changed the key from the verse to chorus and the different clips have different keys too.
3- Dictation had problems here and there.
4- Emotion is so-so


I can judge your improvement cuz i didn't hear your clips before. You are not bad but this is def not your type of song :s
I hope I wasn't too blunt, you wanted honestly, right?