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Daddy's Poem. This will make your heart cry a little =)

#1 User is offline   SJAMES 

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Posted 08 April 2009 - 08:05 PM

Her hair was up in a pony tail,

her favorite dress tied with a bow.


Today was Daddy's Day at school,

and she couldn't wait to go.


But her mommy tried to tell her,

that she probably should stay home.


Why the kids might not understand,

if she went to school alone.


But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say.


What to tell her classmates of why he wasn't there today.


But still her mother worried,

for her to face this day alone.


And that was why once again,

she tried to keep her daughter home.


But the little girl went to school

eager to tell them all.


About a dad she never sees;

a dad who never calls.


There were daddies along the wall in back,

for everyone to meet.


Children squirming impatiently,

anxious in their seats

One by one the teacher called a student from the class.


To introduce their daddy, as seconds slowly passed.


At last the teacher called her name,

every child turned to stare.


Each of them was searching,

for a man who wasn't there.


"Where's her daddy at?"

she heard a boy call out.


"She probably doesn't have one,"

another student dared to shout.


And from somewhere near the back,

she heard a daddy say,

"Looks like another deadbeat dad,

too busy to waste his day.
"

The words did not offend her,

as she smiled up at her Mom.


And looked back at her teacher,

who told her to go on.


And with hands behind her back,

slowly she began to speak.


And out from the mouth of a child,

came words incredibly unique.


"My Daddy couldn't be here,

because he lives so far away.


But I know he wishes he could be,

since this is such a special day.


And though you cannot meet him,

I wanted you to know.


All about my daddy,

and how much he loves me so.


He loved to tell me stories

he taught me to ride my bike.


He surprised me with pink roses,

and taught me to fly a kite.


We used to share fudge sundaes,

and ice cream in a cone.


And though you cannot see him.


I'm not standing here alone.


"Cause my daddy's always with me,

even though we are apart

I know because he told me,

he'll forever be in my heart"

With that, her little hand reached up,

and lay across her chest.


Feeling her own heartbeat,

beneath her favorite dress.


And from somewhere here in the crowd of dads,

her mother stood in tears.


Proudly watching her daughter,

who was wise beyond her years.



For she stood up for the love

of a man not in her life.


Doing what was best for her,

doing what was right.


And when she dropped her hand back down,

staring straight into the crowd.


She finished with a voice so soft,

but its message clear and loud.


"I love my daddy very much,

he's my shining star.


And if he could, he'd be here,

but heaven's just too far

You see he was a firefighter

and died just this past year

When airplanes hit the towers

and taught Americans to fear.


But sometimes when I close my eyes,

it's like he never went away.
"

And then she closed her eyes,

and she saw him there that day.


And to her mothers amazement,

she witnessed with surprise

A room full of daddies and children,

all starting to close their eyes.


Who knows what they saw before them,

who knows what they felt inside.


Perhaps for merely a second,

they saw him at her side.


"I know you're with me Daddy,"

to the silence she called out.


And what happened next made believers,

of those once filled with doubt.


Not one in that room could explain it,

for each of their eyes had been closed.


But there on the desk beside her,

was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.


And a child was blessed, if only for a moment,

by the love of her shining star.


And given the gift of believing,

that heaven is never too far.



They say it takes a minute to find a special

person, an hour to appreciate them,

a day to love them, but then an entire

life to forget them.

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#2 User is offline   agnuque 

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Posted 08 April 2009 - 08:19 PM

goodness. that was beautiful! tears.gif
i love my dadddyyy tears.gif
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Posted 08 April 2009 - 08:28 PM

my eyes are starting to get blury
i love the last stanza...
thanks for sharing
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Posted 08 April 2009 - 08:42 PM

Teared.
(*:
That was a beautiful poem.
Any idea who wrote it?
Or did you write it?
It's really beautiful.

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Posted 08 April 2009 - 08:47 PM

wow tears.gif...no words can explain my feeling while reading it.
so sad and cute, heartwarming~
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We do what we wanna do.
If that's only possible in the underground then we'd like the underground to be our home. It's good like that."
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Posted 09 April 2009 - 02:08 AM

this made me teary.
i love my daddy so much. <3
thanks for sharing this as well.

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Posted 09 April 2009 - 05:08 AM

Same, I kinda teared..

That was really sad and touching. The girl is definitely wise beyond her years. God bless her.
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Posted 09 April 2009 - 08:42 AM

Aww, that's so cute. I teared sad.gif It's VERY heartwarming.
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Posted 09 April 2009 - 08:59 AM

wow this girl is amazing at such a young age T T
this poem gave me goosebumps~

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#10 User is offline   SJAMES 

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Posted 09 April 2009 - 01:28 PM

QUOTE (iloveRAiNBOWS @ Apr 8 2009, 11:42 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Teared.
(*:
That was a beautiful poem.
Any idea who wrote it?
Or did you write it?
It's really beautiful.



Ohh no. I can never write like that.
Haha. I'm not sure who wrote it =/
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Posted 09 April 2009 - 01:47 PM

That is simply beautiful, it makes me want to give my dad a hug. =( Props to whoever wrote it!
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Posted 09 April 2009 - 03:10 PM

this made me teary. tears.gif
i love my daddy too<3
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Posted 09 April 2009 - 03:15 PM

omg.
this made me teary too. tears.gif
that was really beautiful.
just the whole thing was amazing.

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Posted 09 April 2009 - 03:22 PM

omgosh this is a beauitful poem :') <3
made my dayy.

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Posted 09 April 2009 - 03:32 PM

awww : )
wow.
that's so beautifull♥
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