[aibycuh]

hi! this is aibz...

this is my second time posting here. the first time got some poblems with my audio.

this time i made sure that it would be fine.

i kinda raised the pitch because the original one is too low for a girl.

here's the link:

wasurenaide

guys needs some comments!

[JuDfvsp]

ok

listened
it's good^^
but...a little cracked...


any way
i like it^^

[yimmmah]

I wish the background music wasn't so...weird " it would've complimented ur voice sooooo much better. but anyway, good job u were in tune most of the time. I think you just need to work on your breathing intervals. It sounds like you start running out of breath during some of the parts and that tends to weaken your control over your voice. hope that helps and keep it up!

[aibycuh]

thank you guys for the comments! i'll take it as constructive criticisms and will work hard for the next cover. fighting!

[szechuanie]

sounds great..

some problems keeping those higher notes in tune, but that has a lot to do with breathing also.. so just work on your breathing.