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Alicia Keyes - Karma [cover] Final Draft

#1 User is offline   jkim0107 

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Posted 06 May 2009 - 03:40 PM

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Posted 06 May 2009 - 03:46 PM

this is really good for an alicia keys cover!

you have good control of your voice,
but there are some iffy parts mostly when
you're going into your head voice.

you might want to add more attitude
and emphasis on specific lines like

"I remember when I was sittin home alone
Waitin for you til 3 o'clock in the 'morn"

otherwise, awesome mixing.
i enjoyed it a lot!
thanks smile.gif
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Posted 06 May 2009 - 05:17 PM

QUOTE (ix3RAIN @ May 6 2009, 04:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is really good for an alicia keys cover!

you have good control of your voice,
but there are some iffy parts mostly when
you're going into your head voice.

you might want to add more attitude
and emphasis on specific lines like

"I remember when I was sittin home alone
Waitin for you til 3 o'clock in the 'morn"

otherwise, awesome mixing.
i enjoyed it a lot!
thanks smile.gif



haha thanks! yeh, i just cant hit those high notes properly!
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#4 User is offline   Scy91 

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Posted 06 May 2009 - 06:51 PM

i listened to some of your covers on your soundclick, you are a nice singer. i don't know if it's your mic, but you sing really softly in all of your covers...i think you just need to support your voice more by pushing it out with your diaphragm. you have naturally good tone though, just gotta work on the vocals to make your voice sound even better and stronger.
good job, keep it up! : )
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Posted 07 May 2009 - 02:20 AM

QUOTE (ix3RAIN @ May 6 2009, 01:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
this is really good for an alicia keys cover!


you might want to add more attitude


i agree. when this song first came out everyone was covering it. you can obviously sing. this song is about karma, so sing it with a little more attitude. smile.gif it will take the song to the next level if you sing it with more emotion.
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