[Zelee86]

Summer~~ so much time so i recorded a clip!
and i don't know how to mix so i just recorded this in one take so if i sound out of breath, thats why~
i don't know why i sang, i can't sing...so i apologize >_<
i wanna learn to rap so someone teach me^^

Click me

[praew257]

Ok, I don't understand why you are apologizing. You definitely CAN sing. I'm not going to put in mind that this was a one shot since you did post it so I'm going to give constructive criticism on what you have posted.

I like your attitude even if you do sound pretty out of breath at times. You seem a little bit influenced by Shinee's Jonghyun in the chorus. I'm not saying that i think you imitate him (because I don't think so) but I would prefer it if you would relax a little bit more so it won't become like a "trying too hard to make my feelings come through". Relaxing will also make your falsetto come out easier and transition will sound smoother (just don't tone the power down too much because that will make the notes sound "flat").

So in the rap, it sounds like you want to sing it, but it wasn't bad. I don't think I'm fit to comment about your rapping because I admire everyone who at least tries to rap, so I might be a little bit biased there d: I do wonder though if you are not trying to imitate the original there (never heard it so I can't tell) but you kind of change the rapping style a bit at 1:11 (or maybe it's just the notes I don't know) but I personally like it when they have they own style so if you want to rap. The only valueable advice I would have is to find your own style.

Sorry for being harsh but I wouldn't give you this much criticism if i didn't think you could improve. Your voice is very nice to listen too and I did enjoy listening to this!

[Lynni3z]

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ooppppa!!! why are you apologizing??? when you can both sing and rap sooooo perfectly!!!!
<3333333333333
this sounds realllyyyy really reallly reallllyy reallllyyy gooodd!^^
you should finish the whole entire song
i really like your voice and your tone sounds really nice as well^^
i also love the attitude you brought out as well
<333
great job done!!!^^
post more clips soon

i gotta dash now...lol..lecture starts in a bit...LOLL

PS. you sound really young in this clip by the way

[Kyo Hanjin]

HYUNG!! YOU FINALLY POSTED A COVER!!! I'LL BE BACK LATER TO EDIT!!

[Zelee86]

praew257: thanks for the comment ^___^ yeahh i have trouble finding my style and tend to just copy other people's~ me and singing arent too friendly with each other~ kakaka but yea i will def try find my own style~ thanks mucho gracias~

Lynni3z: you are too kind girl~ i sound young cuz i am young! hahahaha (im in denial) <3333

Kyo Hanjin: Do i know you? hahaha im just playing Milk Man! hmmm are we going to ever finish our collab? X________X

[vocalxiah]

Oh my god, you're amazing oppa!
You CAN SING. and RAP!
Don't tell that I'm good, OR that you suck cus I'm the one that should be saying you ROCK.

AHHHHH
-fangirl- 8D

that was great. I keep replaying it aha ha ha!

gahh, I really wanted to cover this song but the lower rap was too low and it sounded horrible with my rap xD
and no one wanted to collab it with me . . . so I had to give up on this song LOLS

[nhattie]

hey, i really liked it esp. the rap

[mochihearts:)]

OMG. i really don't comment a lot but WOAH.
i'm so awestrucked with this. YOU'RE SO COOL!
this is pure love.
WIN! i'm playing it for the third time and god knows when this'll end.
weee~!

[Lynni3z]

nahhh...you're not in denial
its true though....you're still young XD at the peak of your life...ahaha
butt please do finish the song, it sounds awesome ^^
or i can always make a birthday request for you to finish the song right? *nudge nudge*

[Zelee86]

nhattie: hehe thanks for listening and commenting~~ i can;t really hope but i try >_< kakaka

mochihearts:): oh gawd~~ kekeke stop listening to mine and listen to the original~~ they are much more awesome and cool~ hahaa but you should maybe return the favor and record a song so i can listen to it all day! i like listening to other people sing^^

Lynni3z: if i knew how to mix i would~ or its gonna sound worse and worse because i run out of air~ b-day request...that would be no fair!! hahaha JM can sing this song for ya!!

[yblover]

damnn yr voice is so addicting.
i think i replayed the clip several times.

(; lovely lovely voice ma dear.
keep it up.

i'll be looking forward to more covers!<3

[VANNIE_YANG]

omg.

what are youapologizing for? this was really good. keep it up.

[hbunnynote]

What the heck? I opened this up and heard your singing and I thought it was the actual artist singing. Teach me how to sing, pl0x (although im a girl haha)

[Eunhee_]

wow i actually have to agree with the first commenter
you sound similar to Jonghyun in the chorus!
you should definitely get this professionally mixed and cover the whole song
Good job

[Zelee86]

yblover: hahaa people say my voice is annoying~~ but yea i will look forward to more of your dance vids *___*

VANNIE_YANG: thanks~~ you should let me hear you sing too~

hbunnynote: oh wow hahah so much pressure now to sing better~ haha but yeah very generous comment ^;^ the original is so much better, now the guy who really sings this, is amazing!!!

Eunhee_: hahaha i think my singing style switches with each song i sing, which isnt good >__< but thanks for commenting~~

[g-yo]

I think you're relying too much on the actual singer's/rapper's styles because for the first rapper your voice was a lot more throaty, and then the second was more comfortable? I would just advise rapping the first verse as more you : )

Other than that, this was awesome! The second verse pwned : D

[gd_is_great]

u sound great u can rap dude but u need more practices dahz it
keep up man gj overall

[bishie_bashie]

i like your voice!
practise more on the rapping, but overall good job, i enjoyed listening to it (:

[bambishanny]

뭐야 이거? 돼지 멱 따는 소리...

^of course i'm just kidding.

look at all them fangirls and michael! they love you!
i have to say, this was very nice, hyung! you've improved a lot 0.o but get a better mic!

finish it!

[Zelee86]

g-yo: hahaa yea i think i was trying to imitate them more than having my own style~~ i like there style lol~~ my style is ewwww

gd_is_great: yeah~~ i dunno how to practice or get better at rapping though~ i guess just keep listening? iono >__<

bishie_bashie: haha thanks im not really a rapper, or singer... but yea i enjoy doing them both equally!

azn1004girl: 마이크(not michael but recording microphone!) 사줘~나돈없어....그리구앞으로"오빠"라고불러~~ㅋㅋㅋ