[*bBy_J]

haha i think im doing too many of these...

but ! let me know what you think please
IM SO SORRY ABOUT THE BEGINNGINGGG
i thought it would be funny, but i sound really stupid.. ignore it ... -___-
i dont sing the chorus, because i cant sing

G-SLIDE COVER

[gfoo1]

thanks for taking the time to check out my song. i figure id check this one out and give ya some more input. i can tell that you put some work into your delivery cause i definitely can feel some more personality/attitude in your voice. (the "oh no" part was really good..i liked how you varied the delivery) however, you could still use some more work on adding that swagger to your delivery..cause there were some parts that sounded extremely monotone ie. the "told him how to g-slide and he told his mother" line.

flow was alright. practice those faster parts a lil more and i think it'll come out much smoother.

i personally think your singing sounded pretty decent..i actually enjoyed the 2nd verse a lil more than the 1st verse cause you seemed more comfortable/relaxed. on a sidenote, have you ever thought of doing an original song? cause if you haven't thought about it, maybe you should try it..i think it'd definitely allow you to be more free with what you do with the flow/delivery and help you improve much more cause i feel like covers limit you to what the original person did. just my 2cents.

keep it up..let me know if you ever do any more covers/rap songs..id be more than happy to give ya some feedback.

[SEXIElicious]

i personally think you sound better singing than rapping
cuz when you rap, your voice sounds really low so i honestly dont think it sounds as good as when you sing in a higher pitch

or maybe you would sound better rapping if you did in a higher pitch, sorta like cl from 2ne1

but other than that, the flow was pretty okay

keep at itt