[Kiseki_Yoona]

Hey, Im sure you are all sick of me by now. Alas, my boredom has struck again. I sang this one really quick, I really need to start spending more time on my songs ^__^;;; But, it was just for fun. I decided to try a slow song, in english for a change of pace. Its not fabulous, but it was fun to sing. I got a little off one one part of the song, because I havent heard the original in soooo long, and I couldnt find it anywhere.
Comments, critiques welcomed, and encouraged

http://www.soundclick.com/koibitochan

[RaIn33]

wow..i like your voice a lot. good job on this..did you get the instrumental for this? if so..can you PM me it? thanks.

[Raix]

I absolutely love this song. I really wanted to do it for a while >_o
Your vocals need to be louder. It's nice but was off in "grow with time" and a bit in the chorus.
"with you" at the end of the chorus is too fast. You hold the first note to long in the verse and a bit too fast after that, the bridge is off too. But you haven't listened to this for ages so it's fine xD
I like your voice though <3 nice job.

[taceldi]

I love this song, and I like the way you sang it, but I do think you could be louder, or maybe it's cuz of your mic? Nevertheless, nice job!

[Brian]

love your voice but you were off in some places. like what Rai-Rai pointed out. if you fixed those, it would be even more awesome.

[jack jack attack]

REally nice.

[ritzy!]

chorus was really nice..
& i agree with rai-rai ~

[songielove]

awe... i remember this song.. it was on repeat for 1 summer when our family was @ camp puahahaha.~ loved it.~ ANYWAYS!!-->

so lovely..~ i can't really hear you though.~ higher vocals will help.~ you sound really nice..~ yes, off w/ some notes in the verses~* all fine.~j/ listen more.~*Some parts, you need more support. But it's really pretty, you've a really clear voice.~some stuff here and there.~ but it's been a long time, so . AWESOME~

[luvjunjin0819]

ahh man...the volume of ur voice needs to be turned up some!

anyyways....i like ur voice....sounds pretty. some parts were off here and there, but good job, nonetheless!!!

one question...is there anyway u can upload the karoke/instrumental for me??? thanks in advance!

~Tab

[Kiseki_Yoona]

Hey guys~ thanks for all the comments, it makes me feel special lol
I plan on re-doing this on very soon, and posting it up here for you guys, I found the real song, so maybe Ill do better ^___^;;

And luvjunjin0819, I found the inst on Rin-Rin's inst page~

Thanks again guys!!

[PrincessBoa]

I miss the good ol' S Club 7 days..T_T I can't really hear it..but from what i heard, pretty good

*huggies*
PrincessBoa