[hojyoo]

Hi.. Ive been dancing for about 3 yrs now... it would be awesome if u guys could give me some constructive criticism about my dancing...
the link is www.youtube.com/user/phil2yoo
ummmm any vid is up for judgement from the first nine vids on the homepage. thx

[milkbunny]

:]] first

i like it
just practice some more && work on sharpness
try to not be so repetitive when ur freestyln
try out some other moves and try to add that into the transitioning?

[hojyoo]

k thx
ive been tryna work on the transitions anyway

[anothermixedfob]

oo youre really good keep it up.
but i feel like you crammed in too much moves for the song

[CtlunatC]

you have nice foot work, but sometimes it doesnt mix well with your arm movements. from my point of view, your arms arent sharp or accurate enough in their movements so they look "floppy"/messy at times.


good job! keep up with the good work

[LennyRin]

i agree with jamba juice ^ up there.. too many repetative moves makes it kinda boring.. hm.. practice in hitting the moves harder.. freestyle is freestyle and you do what you want but you still have to keep it organized too.. but other than that.. keep it up.. ^^

[lovex3]

You have rhythm! Most people do the same moves again and again when they freestyle, so I don't see that as too much of a problem

The main issue is that your movements aren't bold and clear enough

[Madoki]

slow down and take ur time brah!

[menelausee]

This is pretty good! If you work on controlling speed it will emphasize power moves and add variety to the choreography. Then a 2 minute + video can be made without being monotone or "repetitive".

[hojyoo]

hmmm thx yall! so basically i gotta:
1. get rid of repetitivness
2. sharper movements especially my arms
3. control my rhythm and hit more beats.
yea... i wish i had a bigger space to practice T-T