Good Person - Park Hyo Shin [Cover]

Good Person - Park Hyo Shin [Cover] my last song of my life.. ... . . . believe it!! .. maybe haha

#1 tigerclan

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Posted 25 September 2009 - 02:01 PM

hi everyone!!

I did a cover of Park Hyo Shin's Good person.

I really hope you enjoy it. And comments/critiques are always welcomed!!!

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#2 Fuma

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Posted 25 September 2009 - 02:17 PM

sounded good overall, definitely improved from the first time i heard you, this time it was a little less pitchy, definitely improved there but there can be space, try and work on those falsetto's to be more round, and make sure to stay on pitch , for me when i go falsetto i lose pitch sometimes. also work on that falsetto transition, but nice choruses, and bridge, i really liked it. The wooing in the bridge area, was good. could add a little more dynamics, but overall very nice sound , i dont think this should be your last song

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#3 uponashore

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Posted 25 September 2009 - 03:25 PM

YO BEN WHAT IS THIS
why do you always get first DD:

MIKE i will be back, listening~~
p.s. you're not allowed to quit. OR ELSEE

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#4 sikkony

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Posted 26 September 2009 - 08:19 AM

You'll be back =]~

They all come crawling back

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Posted 26 September 2009 - 08:44 AM

QUOTE (sikkony @ Sep 26 2009, 11:19 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

You'll be back =]~

They all come crawling back

HHAHAHAH LOL ^

~~will be back later to listen~~

awww.. wow that was actually very touching =].. i dont think ive ever listened to your covers before.. but i liked it.. it was definitely different and very refreshing

great job with it but gotta agree with Benson on this one ... =] keep it up tho.. as quoted by sikkony.. lol "they all come crawling back" XP

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Posted 26 September 2009 - 09:42 PM

I have to agree with Fuma on this one ^^;;
I think that your voice is unique and nice though.

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#7 tigerclan

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Posted 27 September 2009 - 05:41 AM

Fuma (ben?) - thanks for the comment!! i really never tried doing falsetto and that's why i always belted notes.. but yeah i tried to work on my falsetto hardcore this time around and i'll definitely continue to work on it!!. . i definitely understand that transitioning part (especially where i start my woo's...) sounded horrible hahaha..

amy - shoot.. i remember your threats... sigh... haha

sikkony - i think i'm already crawling back hahahaha

LennyRin - haha.. i'll patiently wait for your review...

nuey - thanks much!! yeah i hear everything that he has to say... ahhh.. haha

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#8 oasisღ

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Posted 27 September 2009 - 07:17 AM

um, what is this i hear about quitting? i don't think so, mister. D:

i love this song, and i love your voice. *__* i like the different feel you give to this song, since your voice is less huskier than his? you sound clear and smooth in this. i like how you climaxed during the chorus! i can feel the emotion. maybe add a bit more emotion to the verses though?

aww man, your tone is just too gorgeous haha. (:
keep it up!!

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#9 Kyo Hanjin

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Posted 27 September 2009 - 02:16 PM

AHHH I LOVE THIS SONG!!
dude...i'll go on hiatus with you ^^ hehehe.

I love how distinct your tone is...has that slight piercing effect ^^.
The feel is very smooth...
It sounds like you're a lot more comfortable with belting the notes than falsetto...it's something to work on....
Your falsetto sounds kinda weak and forced...and control is kind of lacking..
Went flat right after the bridge....
The parts in chest voice were good...runs were a bit sloppy...
I feel more emotion could be put into this piece...considering it's a very emotional song..

I'm definitely not gonna record this song now thanks to your amazing version lol.

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Posted 27 September 2009 - 04:44 PM

Hmm... it was good overall. Agreeing with Ben/Fuma and Michael/Kyo Hanjin.

But hmm... it's a different voice in contrast to what I've been listening these days. ^^;;

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#11 sikkony

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Posted 28 September 2009 - 08:55 AM

After listening to so many much dryer vocals, listening to your song with more reverb made your song stand out! But not in a bad way!

I really like your voice. I don't think I've listened to you much, probably once. You have a nice solid voice, solid timbre. Like usual with other singers LOL, I cannot hear the problems others hear in your voice, I thought everything was nice. With such awesome singing like this, I don't think that will be your last song. You'll definitely be back.

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Posted 29 September 2009 - 02:12 PM

oasisღ - haha thanks thanks!! i hear my lack of emotion on the verses... hahaha.. i think i was concentrating too much on the singing rather than the lyrics of the song.. haha and i don't think i can ever quit... i need to go to SA (Soompi's Anonymous) hahaha

mike - dude it seems like forever since i last talked to u... and get outta here.. do this song!!! oh i suck at falsetto i'm super working on it.. and i'm definitely more comfortable with belting hahaha

Krazim - thanks for the comment!! yea i totally agree with what both professionals are saying.. i wish i could be pro one day... just one day

sikkony - aww thanks!

i thought i could run away from this but that is a loss cause.. hahaha

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#13 dxc619

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Posted 29 September 2009 - 08:03 PM

Nice try bud! Keep trying! I'm rootin for u tiger.

Quit deleting negative comments lion king ;]

Sorry, I meant to say pu ssy, instead of lion king! hehe.

Keep trying! Even though you suck right now I believe in you! We're all behind you bro.

#14 Kyo Hanjin

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Posted 30 September 2009 - 05:52 PM

QUOTE (dxc619 @ Sep 30 2009, 12:03 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Err...he doesn't suck......he's actually pretty damn good...even right now.
You clearly don't know what you're talking about.....or have some form of hearing issues.

#15 dxc619

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Posted 30 September 2009 - 08:43 PM

Man.. u best start listenin to some good singers... Kpop doesn't cut it man... Your standards of singing is low.. Check out some Eric Benet, Luther Vandross, some Mariah, Whitney... anyone other than this haha.. C'mon.. who we tryin to fool here haha. 8-). I should ask you if you got ur hearin checked. Listenin to So Hot everyday dulls the ears mang! Trust me.. lol Listen to real music bra

Listen to the best man. Even Park Hyo Shin admits that you should ONLY listen to good music. In fact he only listened to black music for 3 years and nothin else. Listen to the best mang and you'll get far!

#16 Can't Read My Eyes

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Posted 01 October 2009 - 12:09 AM

Tigerclan: this is a really hard to song to pull off but i think you did respectable. the only thing i had problems were the emotions and pronunciation but it was pretty good! keep it up and don't let immature kids get to you because that is all they are. They must hate on you because you are good (jealousy), if you were really bad i do not think they would comment at all.

QUOTE (dxc619 @ Sep 29 2009, 09:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

hey little boy, if you think he sucks maybe you should give him critiques so he can improve? Or is that too mature for you? Post up your songs, i want to see how well you sing but you are probably too afraid.

QUOTE (dxc619 @ Sep 30 2009, 09:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Hey Kid, this is a korean music forum, what do you expect? if you are so pro, go to different forum, because some people just do this as a hobby. I do not think anyone listens to "So Hot" as a really deep good song. I think people listen to it as an addictive k-pop song. They take it for what it is. Who are you to say what good music is? i am sure since you listen to so many good singers you are pro and the best singer because you do not listen to the dumb k-pop stuff, right?

it's okay!

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Posted 01 October 2009 - 07:33 AM

Of course, you weirdo 0_o

#18 tigerclan

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Posted 01 October 2009 - 09:14 AM

mike - thx much for the support!

dxc619 - i don't really understand your false accusations and what's with the name calling?? you're an interesting speciment.. why isn't Brian McKnight or Boyz to Men on your list?? anyway.. one thing i can be thankful is for you to bump my threat... i really appreciate that hahaha

Can't Read My Eyes - thanks for your comment on my singing and defending what was said towards me!! yeah i could sense jealously.. just because he posted 10 times and of them he posted four of them on my posts... more like infatuation hahaha anyway.. i'll definitely work on my pronunciation and emotion!! thanks again.

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#19 Jaeho

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Posted 01 October 2009 - 12:19 PM

Eh, what's with the troll.

Anyway, "last song"? Dunno if it was an inside joke or something, but I'm glad you're still singing.

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Posted 01 October 2009 - 04:48 PM

QUOTE (dxc619 @ Oct 1 2009, 12:43 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Yeah overall the standards of singing in the kpop world is low...with all the idols and what not. But there are some hella good singers in the kpop industry such as: Park Hyo Shin, Kim Bum Soo, Naul of Brown Eyes, Isu of MC The MAX, K.Will, Ha Dong Gyun of ex-group WANTED etc etc.
The singers that you mentioned are hella amazing as well.
But yeah I get what you mean about getting far listening to good music. I used to only listen to Dong Bang Shin Gi back then...and sucked as a singer. But then I only started listening to really talented singers and got a lot better as a result of that.
But yeah...what I wanna say is don't compare this tigerclan guy to those types of people...cause those standards ARE HELLA HIGH....and yeah I guess he would suck compared to those people. But it's because those people are singing legends. Also tigerclan is like just starting out....on a kpop forum where's there aren't record deals floating about lol. The ratio of standards you have is unfair in which you compare him to.

That's just my 2 cents...sorry if I offended you or anything ^^. I just think maybe you should've put more clarification to your original post...and then you wouldn't get such nasty replies lol ^^.