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F(x) - Chocolate Love [English Version]

#1 User is offline   Mellerz 

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Posted 04 November 2009 - 05:40 PM

This is what I've been waiting to release.. One of my favorite songs and I loved working on this.
I chose F(x)'s over SNSD just because I like the beat a bit more and plus, Amber's rap. Like, hello?!



F(x) - Chocolate Love [English Version]
( c l i c k )

My chocolate love, my appetite
Just wanna break you off, just wanna take a bite
Chocolate love, yes i got to
Just gotta take you home alone just you and me

If you want me, then you must be
Able to love me so
Are you unsure? I'll be your girl
And you can be my boy

I got you bad. I call- I call it chocolate love
You know I want cha, you want me
You're my- You're my, oh. Chocolate Love

My jeans fit so tight. I think I might
Slip you right into my pocket for the night
Chocolate love, brand new world
Various flavors, I'll be your cinnamon girl

See your concern, is you must learn
To hold a girl like so
Are you unsure? I'll be your girl
And you can be my boy

I got you bad. I call- I call it chocolate love
You know I want cha, you want me
Want some- Want some, oh. Chocolate Love
I got you bad. I call- I call it chocolate love
You know I want cha, you want me
You're my- You're my, oh. Chocolate Love

You and I. Now, picture that. That's so fly
Sweet tease, break me off a piece of that chocolate pie
Bottom to top, you're so hot
In my eyes a perfect profile
Something about that dark complexion that cause me feeling your style

Ou, you're not suppose to have this effect that's pulling me closer to you, now
Ou, just what are you doing that's proving to me that you don't just want my love
Ou, you're not suppose to have this effect that's pulling me closer to you, now
Ou, just what are you doing that's proving to me that you don't just want my love

I got you bad. I call- I call it chocolate love
You know I want cha, you want me
Want some- Want some, oh. Chocolate Love
I got you bad. I call- I call it chocolate love
You know I want cha, you want me
You're my- You're my, oh. Chocolate Love

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Posted 04 November 2009 - 06:21 PM

WOW, HEY THERE
So, you sound super hot. I can't take how hot you sound!!! O.O

I really really wish that your vocals were a little bit louder because the background music is seriously overpowering you, especially during the rap. And I really wanted to hear that rap, too! O: I liked how you added this old-style touch to it, though, from what I could hear. If that made ANY sense at all. xD I think it was because of the way you annunciated the words. It was just really cool!

I was a little bit shocked when you got to the chorus because it was off key. ): Like, you were singing all the right notes and intervals and stuff! It just wasn't in the same key as the background music. o.o So that was a little bit confusing to listen to.

Otherwise, awesome job! I really liked listening to this!
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Posted 04 November 2009 - 06:29 PM

Wow! Your voice is nice, The lyrics are nicely written too.
You sound really sexy in some parts. I agree with the post above, the chorus was really off-key. ;[
The little bridge after Amber's part was REALLY REALLY GOOD! That was my favorite part.
Did you mix this yourself, very nice mixing too!

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Posted 04 November 2009 - 07:39 PM

oh, i liked this!
though the chorus part is a bit lower than the original, but the mixing is really good! loved it!
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Posted 05 November 2009 - 03:23 AM

Ou! thanks for the comments and suggestions guys. I have to look back and edit some things up then.
Yesh, I did mix it myself. So I kept changing the volume back and forth cuz I didn't know what to do, LOL!
I will update in like... 9 hours when I'm out of school. c(= This song was super fun to do.


--Edited. Blah, is that how it's done? LOL. Harmonizing is epic fail >.<
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Posted 06 November 2009 - 03:51 PM

ohhhh very very nice.
i love your english versions.
the lyrics fit nicely and so did your voice.
i'm definitely feeling the chocolate love. LOL.
thanks for sharing and keep it up. (^__^)
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Posted 07 November 2009 - 08:49 AM

^ thank you. I think i'm starting to get the hang of all this mixing and what not. What's next.. Chu? LOL.
(yeah, F(x) fanatic here)
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Posted 07 November 2009 - 10:52 AM

wow. PRO-NESS.
lmao.
your voise really fits to the song, and really really good lyrics.

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Posted 11 November 2009 - 11:13 AM

Lol wow Mellers you did get really good a mixing! Lol it sounds amazing!
And i agree with someone up there i really like the bridge after Amber's rap i was mesmerized by it xD
Keep up the good work buddy! =)
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Posted 13 November 2009 - 08:32 PM

i really like the lyrics, but this is too soft for me.
i wish you put more attitude in it.
whatever. true story, bro.
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Posted 14 November 2009 - 03:10 PM

i thought overall this was a good cover.. mixing and vocals were pretty nice except for the chorus.. just sounded it was slightly off...

yeah the instrumental made it sound so 'thug-ish' but your vocals seem more cute than.. yeah hahaha idk what i'm talking about

r these original lyrics? or did u make them yourselves?
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Posted 14 November 2009 - 06:37 PM

^ lmfao "thug-ish"
the lyrics i had written myself.

PH4T i know what you mean. i wish i could make it louder, but whenever i try. it doesnt work.
it's weird. i wish i knew another way. garageband just hates me >.< lol
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Posted 15 November 2009 - 05:01 PM

I use Garageband! O: Have you tried just duplicating the tracks that are too soft until they are loud enough? That's what I always have to do in my mixes.
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Posted 16 November 2009 - 09:43 AM

Your voice fits it perfectly!! smile.gif))
And you're really into it so it doesn't sound flat and emotionless smile.gif)
one thing though is that you might want to work on intonation a tad, it sometimes fluctuates a little, try to keep it steady happy.gif

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Posted 16 November 2009 - 04:49 PM

^ Yes, sometimes that can be challenging. Like, I just want to stay on one tone, and even if I tell myself to stop, I still end up doing it automatically... It gets annoying... LOL. Thanks for the advice, though!! ^^

Ariah Oh, snap. I never thought of that! I shall try it for my next recording. Thanks for the tip!
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