Beautiful by Christina Aguiefjk;blera

#1 C.Y.

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Posted 07 November 2009 - 04:53 PM

quick take of a nice song by Christina Aguilera. please check it out and comment : ) i'm a dude by the way, just so no one is alarmed by the low jigsaw-sounding voice

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songI...;songID=8319022

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Posted 08 November 2009 - 07:06 PM

no one here likes Christina Aguilera?

#3 chemical9

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 03:26 PM

^ i do! haha. your clip is too short! but from what i heard, it's not smooth enough. you keep doing this thing that kinda cuts the front of your words off (?) lol don't really know how to describe it, but keep listening to it and you'll know what i mean. nice falsetto though. haha

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 03:59 PM

^I think maybe you are doing too much (over use of) addlibs which comes off raspy and is what chemical9 means and I agree too. I like the tone and attitude voice towards the song though. Good job and just work on being more natural/smooth because the clip was short lol.

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 06:59 PM

haha ohhh yeah i knew it, the adlibs were too forced or something. i don't know the song too well but it popped in my head so i just recorded it and winged it. and yeah, i'm a lazy-ass so all my recordings are verse + chorus >.<
thanks a lot for listening and critiquing guys, i'll keep everything in mind : )