When I'm Gone [Cover] - Eminem

When I'm Gone [Cover] - Eminem Another rap attack....

#1 tigerclan

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Posted 07 November 2009 - 07:55 PM

Hiya!!

So this song is mad sad.. (hella) whatever.. it's really emotional..
Though he has a totally different life situation than I do.. the message he conveys.. i can totally relate..

Bubbles.. anyway.. this is dedicated to Yoly!! and Yoly remember this:

And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back

HAHA... snapple apples

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#2 Kyo Hanjin

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Posted 07 November 2009 - 07:56 PM

I CALL FIRST!!!! B EBACK T O EDIT!!

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Posted 07 November 2009 - 08:53 PM

^Doesn`t count Michael!
Mike, it sounds wonderful.
I got teary since there was so emotion in it T__T
Tsk, you improve so quickly with minor things only.
Awesomeeeee.

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#4 jadedbeauty

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 06:50 AM

^
^ edit your dang post, michael! you turdbag!

Awwww.
"Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice"
LMFAO! Oh dangggg~
Hahahha! Man, your rapping voice is hot yo! The songs so sad. ): why does it have to be a sad song?! HUH!!
Lol, you already know how i feel about your voice..*coughcough*
Thanks for the dedication! mwhahaha. Lol! Time to sing the songs i told you to sing! pronto!
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#5 sikkony

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 07:37 AM

MMmm wow, sound really nice. There so much attitude in the rap, but the right amount of attitude, and the right attitude. The flow is really smooth, and the mix is very clean. It's really nice. Awesome stuff! <3

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#6 tigerclan

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 10:13 AM

michael - haha yeah dude that almost counts..

niece - yeah it's so emotional.. glad u liked it!! and i'm glad i'm improving!

yoly - haha what song are u talking about? i gave up singing.. hahaha

sikkony- oh shoot.. now i recognize your name on skype hahaha (they call me mr.bubbles) wtf haha.. glad u liked the rap!

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#7 minnilu

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 11:00 AM

Sounds hot... =) I think the attitude is just right...

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 11:38 AM

i remember being a huge eminem fan back in middle school, in my "gangster phase" ahhhaaa.
nice rapping dude

i have no idea how to get a good "rap voice" haha.

yo you should try rapping this one next
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TJBeVT0q5Ss...feature=related

haha i'm kidding...unless you want to, ofc.

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 02:15 PM

what, you rap too?! this is really good. but i'm not quite a rapper so i can't give any useful comments. love it!

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 03:54 PM

hot shizzle fo rizzle~~~!!!!!!
damnnn ur rap game is on point!!!

u already own me in singing.... now u owning rap...stop being so greedy!

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#11 Krazim

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Posted 09 November 2009 - 05:24 PM

HOMIGOSH! ^o^ I love this song! *listens*

Daaaang! Is everyone rapping AND singing now?!?! Tsk tsk... looks like the competition heightens!

It was hawt! Lala~

You sounded really mad... O_O But then... that's Eminem for ya'. XD I really thought you were gonna sing on the chorus or add some kind of your own style on it. XP But yep yep, great job!

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#12 tigerclan

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Posted 10 November 2009 - 05:21 PM

minnilu -

thanks!!

C.Y. - HAHAHA that song u had a link for.. holy crap.. so many obscenities hahahaha if i was like EVER super angry.. maybe i'll give it a whirl hahaha and dang if u were listenin to Eminem in middle school.. i must be like 5-6 years older than you HAHA

chemical9 - haha thanks! tryin my best to get better at it!

Eug - get outta here man.. u so sick at both singing and rapping.. mad people would die to have your skills.. mine are subpar.. bleh

kim - hahaha i'm unoriginal

hahaha.. i'll try if i ever come out with something new hahaha

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#13 uponashore

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Posted 10 November 2009 - 07:10 PM

DANGDANGDANGGGGGGG !!!

snapplez, mike~
so good
i love your emotion, i can feel it ... you amazing (:

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#14 JESSCHOI

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Posted 10 November 2009 - 07:18 PM

you need to rap for me live. your singing/rapping voice is so different!
very talented in both fields! mucho jealous

and what's going with nrb?!?! let me know sooon!!

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#15 NymphoeniX

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Posted 11 November 2009 - 09:23 AM

OMG nothing to say
just love it so muchhh >333
you sounds so sexy... cool rapin' and Wowww your emotional...
wanna hear more rap from you ^^

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#16 Jnn

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Posted 11 November 2009 - 09:58 AM

I really enjoyed this, great attitude..and your voice is really nice. Hope to hear more from you, but perhaps with better flow...you're definitely on beat but sometimes too much that some sentences are separated in a choppy way. The last part was awesome though, flowed really really well.

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#17 tigerclan

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Posted 12 November 2009 - 05:44 AM

amy - hahaha snapple apples indeed!!

jess - haha i know everyone says it is such extremes.. hahaha maybe it's cause no one heard me like angry at the world before hahaha.. friday still on holla!

NymphoeniX - thanks!! i will try to keep more coming

Jnn - haha thanks! just gotta listen to it more to clear up those 'choppy' sections hahaha

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