[kevinjseo91]

Yeah I tried again but failed again

please watch and comment

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TgoD7dbOcyY

haha please try not to bash me too bad

Critics are welcome
or if your just having a bad day
and my voice made it worse
you can speak up
cause i need to get better

[CS1507]

hey there~

well first of all, you sound uncomfortable~? loosen up abit... plus.. u didn't memorize the lyrics did ya??? cuz if u don't memorize the lyrics.. u'll tend to lose the right tone for the song...

but overall, ur voice is not bad~ at times yea it gets off key~ don't worry everyone gets that~..
and don't just 'scream' as if u're pissed or something... u gotta 'scream with feelings'... xD it takes lotsa practice to get that right~

but nice effort.. keep practicing~!