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Dumb College Essay and it got 61%?!

#1 User is offline   sj22 

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Posted 27 February 2006 - 05:41 AM

http://www.wimp.com/essay/
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#2 User is offline   moto 

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Posted 27 February 2006 - 10:32 AM

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that deserved a 0%
WOW i even write better than that sleep.gif
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#3 User is offline   xx_smilez 

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Posted 27 February 2006 - 02:16 PM

LOL. I remember this being posted on Soompi before-- still very funny. The writer should get a 1% for humor.
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 02:23 PM

if i were the marker i'd give him 100% because that's the most entertaining college essay i've ever read. LOL
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 02:44 PM

^ Haha yeah.
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 03:40 PM

haha liked original commentary. i remember for my ap english class, we had to read past essays from the test all ranging from 1-9. i read this one paper that was scored a 1. it was like only 2 sentences long and was about the same story as well. the kid wrote something like "the guy killed his dad cuz he loved his mom. he wanted to sex her up like hell."
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#7 User is offline   carol 

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Posted 27 February 2006 - 04:29 PM

sleep.gif What crude language & I love how he states "This is my thesis statement".
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 04:48 PM

LMAO LMAO LMAO laugh.gif

funny how the professor points out the obvious. haha

good one.

wait he got 61%?! LOLL~

and the works cited laugh.gif
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 05:07 PM

LOL nice grade though
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 05:17 PM

What are you talking about? Best essay ever.
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 05:39 PM

That's the hottest essay.

"Where's the text"?
LOL
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 05:54 PM

AHAHAHA.


"This is page three."
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 06:11 PM

Best. Essay. Ever.
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 07:14 PM

lol that was amusing
"This is my thesis statement" haha

but yeah, that's a pretty bad essay for 61%
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 07:20 PM

The most funniest and creative I've ever seen. lol! I love how he got 61%. biggrin.gif
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 08:34 PM

lol... i jus love the part where he types the threat in all capital letters... HAha... hilarious man...
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 08:52 PM

haha this is my thesis statement and this is page three. laugh.gif the works cited page.
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 08:58 PM

is this a real college essay written by a real person??

i think he deserves his 61% not a 0% because he tried and put some words..and it had humor...lol..even though it didn't really have anything to do with what he was writting..
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 10:31 PM

IS THIS REAL?
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Posted 27 February 2006 - 10:34 PM

O______O Wow.. Some.. colorful language. tongue.gif



I agree. Doesn't deserve that high mark.

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