Omg, Jekki. That is seriously the sweetest thing! There are some lines in the song that just totally blew me away! & the fact that this is a song especially dedicated to his girlfriend makes it 1,000,000 times sweeter. Gosh, okay Jiwon we know perfectly well how in love you are. We get it. & i'm actually imagining Jiwon singing this song in front of her.
Thanks dear.ü But btw, for this part, i'm a bit confused~
You are my everything 너만을 위해 붙인
어떠한 노랫말도 (You know that My love) 너를 말로
모두 표현하진 못해 어설픈 내 짧은 고백
그것 조차 너무 기뻐하는 너의 눈물에 비해 내가 부족해
언제나 사랑할께 널 웃음만 가득하게 늘
네가 있어 어제 보다 더 하루가 행복한 오늘
내 품에 살며시 안기어 잠든 너에게
-- Is the first line missing in the translation or you included that together with the second line? Where should i put the (You know that My love) part?ü
"You are my everything All the lyrics that were written for you can't even express my feelings for you."And also this part,
This is how I do내 삶의 전부 내사랑 my boo
This is how I do 我的一生 全部的爱my boo
This is how I do my whole live all of my love my boo.My whole live all of my love?
Hehe sorry Jekki if i'm being nosy! Thanks again!

No problem g1! I am known to overlook stuff sometime! having a 2nd set of eyes looking over stuff never hurts!
The 1st part you are talking about puzzled me too but the orignal translation is just like that
2nd part
This is how I do내 삶의 전부 내사랑 my boo
This is how I do 我的一生 全部的爱my boo
This is how I do, my whole live, all of my love, my boo.spaces between this is how I do, my whole live and all of my love and my boo
ahaha you didn't even mention the most awkard part for me
너의 미소에 난 숨을 쉬어 너의 눈빛에 난 꿈을꿔
在你的微笑里 我呼吸看着你的眼睛 我在沉睡
In your smile I breath while looking into your eyes, I am falling asleep
I must have retype this part 5 times and it still comes out a little weird T.T
Hope that helped, after lyrics translating news is acutually easy

Since there were some discussion about Gilmi liking Jiwon by janjher I saw this article it's a short one but it just shows how gilmi looks up to Jiwon and how Jiwon really looks after Gilme
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CREDIT TO 水瓶泡沫
1月15日
1.Gilme“Hiphop女战士?好像更像文化少女。”【Sports朝鲜】
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殷志源是一辈子的恩人。
发掘Gilme的不是别人正是‘殷初丁’殷志源。与Gilme接触了有5年多的他问Gilme“要不要和哥哥一起来”的时候,Gilme毫不犹豫地就答应了。她能够成为歌手完全是因为殷志源的存在。说起殷志源的时候她的眼中泪光闪烁。
“志源哥真的是一辈子的恩人。是他让我能够做歌手,而且还对我说了很多有帮助的话。他本来不是这种类型的人,不是会好好打电话、回短信的那种类型,但是对我却会常打电话,也会鼓励我,发短信也都会很快回复。分明不是这种人的却这样对我了,更让我觉得感动。”
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{……电厂……电厂……殷志源你就是一电厂……强心脏里Psy说的对,火田民。话说咱们志源大人就像个漏气的煤气罐,自己没想过要爆炸,偏偏避免不了周围产生各种各样的火星……}
Eun Jiwon is someone I am in debt to my whole life.
The person that discovered Gilmi is none other than Eun Jiwon, When after knowing gilmi for 5 year he asked her " did you want to come with oppa ?" (to Jiwon's company GYM entertainment) Gilmi did not even stop to consider she just said yes. The only reason she was able to become a singer is because of Jiwon, when she talks about Jiwon you can see the tear in her eyes.
"Jiwon oppa is someone I am in debt to my entire life, he is the one that made it possible for me to become a singer, he told me a lot of useful information, he is not normally like this , he is not the type that calls people back or reply back to text right away or often. But he calls me often, he support and encourges me, when I sent him text he replies right away, when you don't expect it from him but he does it anyways, it makes me feel really touched"
Below are comment from the person that translated the article and I agree with her statement 1000%!
Jiwon is basically like a leaking gas stove, he never intend to explode but there is just too many sparks (Ladies ) around him
in Strong heart Psy refer to Jiwon as huo tien meng, what it means is he light a small fire first (in the girl's heart) and if nothing major happens (like if she doesn't fall for him) then he will hang around and just treat her as a friend BUT if her heart CATCHS ON FIRE!!!(Like she starts to fall hard for Jiwon) Then Jiwon will run away!!