[K-popMiko]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.c...;songID=4357631
I'm sorry if the mixing is off or it's too loud or something. It's been a while since I've mixed songs and yeah.
Comments and criticism appreciated. I'm am debating whether or not to audition for SM and it would really help. This song was done for fun, but also kind of for pratice.

Lynne: Feel my brand new beat
nanairo no hyoujou de omoi wo egaku kara

Both: So cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
so cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
so cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
Don’t look back Baby, always look at me

Lynne: doushiyoumonai majiwaru feeling
risei ja tomerarenai isshun
kuchibiru ni saita madoromi

Mina: kurikaeshiteru mayoinukete
akehanatsu mado no mukou kawa ni
zutto misugoshiteta my blue bird

Lynne: “love you”
mada hayai
“sou?”
demo mou
Mina: “be friend?”
tte iu jiki janai
toshitara, fureaeru kyori de ai wo mikiwametai

Both: dare yori mo dare yori mo kagayaiteru
itoshisa to mukiau yo
eyes to eyes nanairo no hyoujou de omoi wo egaku kara

Both: So cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
Don’t look back Baby, always look at me

Mina: hokori tamaru mitai ni gaman shitakunaishi
aenai wake wa sono mune no naka ni aru kedo

Lynne: atarashii closet irodoru red, blue, white...
somerarenai sonzai de itai
hitori dake wakatteite hoshii

Mina: “love me”
namida mo ukeireru
Lynne: happy end kara hajimaru
futari wo kanjiru jikan kasanete nurikaeteku

Both: ima, taisetsu na hito ga iru
soredake de migakareteku amazing
mabushii nanairo no ashita e to tobidasou with brand new beat

Mina: Because your love is so good
I’m truly yours. I’ve never felt this way before

Lynne: setsunasa ga afureru tabi
sotto kokoro de yorisoetara
nemurenai yo ga aketemo
nanigenai yasashisa ni kidzukeru you ni

Mina: dare yori mo dare yori mo kagayaiteru
itoshisa to mukiau yo
eyes to eyes nanairo no hyoujou de omoi wo egaku kara

Lynne: ima, taisetsu na hito ga iru
soredake de migakareteku amazing
mabushii nanairo no ashita e to tsuredashite with brand new beat

Both: So cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
So cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
So cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
Don’t look back Baby, always look at me

Mina: So cool... so bright… (I) feel so good

Lynne: So cool... so bright… (I) feel so good
Both: Don’t look back Baby, always look at me

[dark intuitions]

you need to learn to control your voice a lot more, it goes off pitch at times. Cute mix though, but your harmonies/unison singing wasn't matching perfectly. Just keep practicing. It gets better I think. It's not too bad.

Edit/
Ok with lyrics.
Ok, so you're the really ultra cute voice...is that your natural voice? I mean, both of your voices are cute, but her's sounds a lot more natural.

Mina: Because your love is so good
I’m truly yours. I’ve never felt this way before

You are really straining here. *winces* Notice how in the next section Lynne goes into headvoice? I think that would suit the section more. To be honest, both of you need a little a little more control, but Lynne sounds more...i don't know, natural? I guess. Try singing without forcing the cute factor, i think that might be a lot of the problem. By forcing it to be cute, you narrow your voice, making it difficult to hit the notes. It also makes blending difficult.
Sorry if this seems harsh, k? Just want you to improve if you are going to audition.

[K-popMiko]

you need to learn to control your voice a lot more, it goes off pitch at times. Cute mix though, but your harmonies/unison singing wasn't matching perfectly. Just keep practicing. It gets better I think. It's not too bad.

Oops, sorry. I forgot to post the lyrics, so I don't know who it's meant for.
I'm the one bolded. And yeah, this is the first song I've mixed that sounds close to decent o-o
Thanks a lot though. I have a problem with keeping my voice steady and stable, mostly with whole notes.

-edit
Okay, so I think the problem with me is I put too much of an edge into my voice then. Cause when I sing I usually like that. Uhh..also, the mic makes my voice sound 'cuter' or more specifically younger =_=
I'll try to soften my voice with the next part =]
Thank you for the tips!

[Raix]

MINA!
It's been ages since I've heard you sing

Is it just me, or does it sound echoey?

Lynne goes a bit fast at the start.

Mina, you need to practice controlling your voice. It's your main problem =/ You sound a bit chopped up as well in the 2nd verse.

Lynne keeps going off in the timing >< She goes too fast. She's also a bit shaky atr times.

Basically dark-intuitions said most fo the stuff.

It's cute though. A lot of clipping at the end, gets too loud.

Keep practicing! I wanna sing cute like you guys >_<

Mina needs to sing something like a CCS song =D

[BabyK]

OMG!!!! o_________o You two have such cute voices! Sooooooo talented! o__________o You best better be auditioning for like SM or something X3

But really! You two have great voices! It's like.... WOAH!