[rufus.]

An original song, about a girl named, Indigo-Raven. Hope you like it, and thanks for clicking! ^^

tempo ~ "Indi Ray" (3:20) -direct link-
soundClick link
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Indi Ray

Silver spoons and lights blind her with their gleaming demise
But she's smart enough to look down and remember the dirt below

I know her, just as 'Indi Ray'
on the corner of that block
a shoebox on the sidewalk
Just playing her acoustic guitar
The world's your stage, blue bird
So, fly up and afar

Indi Ray

Release your shadow
Will your soul to fly
Release your shadow
Blue skies ahead
Indigo-Raven, you were meant for the sky

Hey

Oh, look; she's made it
I knew she'd make it

Indi Ray

Ooh...

I know her, just as 'Indi Ray'
on the corner of that block
a shoebox on the sidewalk
Just playing her acoustic guitar
The world's your stage, blue bird
So, fly up and afar

Indigo-Raven, or just 'Indi Ray'
on the corner of that block
a shoebox on the sidewalk
Just playing her acoustic guitar
The world's your stage, blue bird
So, fly up and afar
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[Jacky_Knife]

The beginning seemed a little 'low'. er, how to describe. like it seems like your going for a high note but you dont, maybe its a 'key' thing. Maybe its the way you designed your song. its good, the instrumental.

You've got a nice voice.

anyways,
take care.

[rufus.]

Thanks for the feedback, Jacky! ^^ The beginning was supposed to sound kinda low, but listening to it now, it's starting to sound a bit awkward to me. I might resing it, if I get the time. :x
Thanks so much for listening--and for the comment on my soundclick.