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Sm Song ---- Somwhere Over The Rainbow one shot, like the audition. PLEASE CRITIQUE

#1 User is offline   trulime 

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 02:26 PM

my version.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=46619

all c/c's are welcome. really, i have 2 days. hehe.
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Posted 20 September 2006 - 02:45 PM

you sound like crystal kay... i dont know much about singing but it sounds good to me , a little excessive at some points but then again if its for an audition you got to go all about and show them what you can do..

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 02:58 PM

Yeah, you're good. It's very... soulful. You have a very pretty and mature voice.

I think like... half of the Sm auditioners feel threatened now rofl haha.

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Posted 20 September 2006 - 03:18 PM

O_O Danggggggggggg
You are hecka good!! You remind me of Alicia Keys! =D
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Posted 20 September 2006 - 07:59 PM

Ahhhhhhh yay =O. XD i replied in your Promise U thread.. T__T I lovelovelovelove your voiiice <3 definitely mature and =O! Soulfulll.xDD. Uhm O_O;

Lol, what Mentos said =D. And ye O_O. Im not an expert on singing at all, and i know it was a one shot.. O_O mmm.. parts ilke.. "rain~~BOW" you sorta like.. belted <-- not the word im looking for i dont think... the rest of the word out (the 'bow') part.. perhaps you want to try to get it smoother? unless it was sposed to be like that. ill just go shut up and do my hw;;

awesome job =D pawn those auditions!~
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Posted 20 September 2006 - 10:19 PM

heheh thanks. i think this song will be my main and promise u in a lower key will be my backup. with the rap of course! smile.gif gluck to everyone else and more c/c's are definately welcome.
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Posted 21 September 2006 - 04:19 AM

you have such a nice soulful voice. if SM doesnt take you (which tehy have been known to do for really soulful voiced people) you should def. try out for JYP or YG.

oh and this song doesnt do your voice justice. you should BLOW them away with your strong voice that most asians do not posess... sing something like if i aint got you or... i dont know... harder more soulful song. your voice is gorgeous, show them that. ^^ i know a lot of auditioners will be singing if i aint got you or hero or whatnot... but YOU will be the one that they'll remember bc you sounded the best for those songs. i think its ok to sing a song that everyone else sings... IF you can stand out amongst all of them.

good luck! ^^
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Posted 21 September 2006 - 04:45 AM

i remember posting in your "voice within" thread. i agree with xiahukno, that this song doesn't do you justice. No worries, you have a beautiful voice! But i actually prefer you singing voice within though. So, do reconsider your song choice.
and GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR AUDITION!!(:
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Posted 21 September 2006 - 09:19 AM

QUOTE(xiahukno @ Sep 21 2006, 07:19 AM) View Post

you have such a nice soulful voice. if SM doesnt take you (which tehy have been known to do for really soulful voiced people) you should def. try out for JYP or YG.

oh and this song doesnt do your voice justice. you should BLOW them away with your strong voice that most asians do not posess... sing something like if i aint got you or... i dont know... harder more soulful song. your voice is gorgeous, show them that. ^^ i know a lot of auditioners will be singing if i aint got you or hero or whatnot... but YOU will be the one that they'll remember bc you sounded the best for those songs. i think its ok to sing a song that everyone else sings... IF you can stand out amongst all of them.

good luck! ^^



QUOTE(Lene @ Sep 21 2006, 07:45 AM) View Post

i remember posting in your "voice within" thread. i agree with xiahukno, that this song doesn't do you justice. No worries, you have a beautiful voice! But i actually prefer you singing voice within though. So, do reconsider your song choice.
and GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR AUDITION!!(:


thanks for the comments. I was thinking If I ain't got you. I will try that. Man, the audition is tomorrow!
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Posted 21 September 2006 - 07:22 PM

oh my gosh~~~ first off, goood luck!!!! ^____________________^

and second, your voice is POWERFUL! ^__^ i know sm girl singers voice are more like soft and "hit that note" kind of voice, but u got soul, girl~ blast them away!!!

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Posted 24 September 2006 - 09:16 PM

OH MYYY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
YOU WERE IN MY AUDITION GROUPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!
..i think
i was number #159 in the OC audition
..were you close to that # at all?
this girl in my group like 2 people after me sang this song
and sang it in the style you just sang
i think it was youuuu
WAS IT? THAT WOULD BE SO AWESOME
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well umm..
i dont think critiques would help now.. so umm
i hope you did good on your audition

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Posted 25 September 2006 - 09:02 PM

^ O_O LOL that wouldvebeen cool =D.

!! So if that was you =O Im guessing you did awesomely?
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Posted 26 September 2006 - 10:50 AM

nah i was #183.. and i didn't end up singing this song. i sang if i ain't got you. hahahah.
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Posted 26 September 2006 - 07:57 PM

Try singing it more smoothly. And don't force it too much. Good luck. smile.gif
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Posted 27 September 2006 - 12:03 AM




the first song i listened from you was, promise u,
but somewhere over the rainbow was really good,
but like somebody said make it more smooth?
but then man, it's really good! you're really good!
i like your voice! hahaha, how'd ya do?


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Posted 27 September 2006 - 06:26 PM

omg. I so luff luff luff your voice! <333 I hope you did well in your auditions ;]

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Posted 27 September 2006 - 11:31 PM

QUOTE(ginaaax3 @ Sep 27 2006, 03:03 AM) View Post

the first song i listened from you was, promise u,
but somewhere over the rainbow was really good,
but like somebody said make it more smooth?
but then man, it's really good! you're really good!
i like your voice! hahaha, how'd ya do?



QUOTE(_mwish` @ Sep 27 2006, 09:26 PM) View Post

omg. I so luff luff luff your voice! <333 I hope you did well in your auditions ;]


I did aiite. I did "If I ain't got you" and I was actually really satisfied with my performance. It was a good delivery.. I dunno, results aren't up yet or I just never got called. haha.
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