[dark intuitions]

wheee~
It's been a hectic week at school, so i decided to blow off some steam this afternoon by doing something fun
And that fun involved translating translated lyrics into something rappable...and so here is my very weird attempt at rapping.
Alive

This is an ED to Naruto (the 4th one I believe) and ever since I heard it, I wanted to try it.
But I don't have time to do much more, so please comment and critique



Hmaster, go study. *points at books*

[Raix]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I wanted to do this song last year but forgot
It really isn't that hard to rap if you listen to it 346457534565345 times xD It's not too fast.

I think your voice suits the chorus

waratte aru kereba ii...

Your rapping's so cute <3 You've improved so much~

I love the lyrics. I like your vocie better than the original hahaha

This is really good

[mikez]

lyrics are coolios.. some didnt rhyme tho haha.

the beat was really cool, specially the scratching in the end

i guess ill say what rai said on the rapping lol.. its cute, but erriely reminds me of my cousin

[`Nivek]

Naruto eh? No wonder it sounded familiar Haha. I was like " WOAH I'VE HEARD THIS SONG BEFORE! " Your voice went well with the chorus. I finally noticed that you had a accent during the rapping part. haha I've never noticed it in your other songs before. But getting back on the topic, your rapping sounded on time I think, sounded kinda dull though, but thats understandable since you dont rap. It was cute haha :] Good Job.

[dark intuitions]

mm...much thanx to rai, mikez and kevin (eh, can i call you that, KoreanBreaker is too long -__-") for the feedback ^^


And Mikez and Rai will be helping me out with finishing the song, so keep an eye out for it!