[pucapunipoemi]

u guys can listen to the original track here which is sung by FIR:

original song

haha.. this is me trying to sing the same song... but kept on having difficulty doing it .. i don't kno y i can't sing it with the bg music... only good singing it with out the bg music~~ oh yeah.. and at the end, i stopped before i finished cuz my mom kept on hurrying m to eat so i have to redo the last phrase again and so that's y the end was like 4 beats slower

my singing

[whitekissx]

You have a nice soft voice. ^^ But I think you're not projecting... or you're holding back. ANYWAY, I liked it.

[crystallizedtear]

I love this song ==> and your voice is very pretty ; but I agree with the top poster - you're not projecting it out there.... and you take too many breaths (thats my problem with singing too lol)

[flyaway01]

i like this song.. you need to SING! not just make notes w/ your throat... this song needs AIR heheh.. hope you understand ^^ it wasn't out of tune or anything

[SophiaSan]

OMGAHHHH
i love F.I.R
eqwuioeuqwiou the lead singer has such a nice voice

you kinda sound like her
i love your voice
<333
lets make a collab together someday <3

[pucapunipoemi]

thanx everyone for the advice! i'll try to project my voice out! since i was like almost out of breath when i sang this... does anyone knows where can u go to take voice lessons? cuz i don't think i sing it in the right way i don't think i used my stomach that much...

and for SophiaSakamoto: sure! i would luv to collab with u someday! if my singing improves any better~~