[x3wendy]

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[o6.91]

it wasnt bad.. i couldnt barely hear you though.
turn the music down a little?
but you have a really cute voice. lol ^^

[disfunktional.]

Yupp it was alright.
Accept the music was loud and u were singing pretty small.
Keep practicing! xP

[x3wendy]

thnks for commenting __Nae & LiLxAzianxGaL :] i will keep practicing.
for some reason when i play it on my computer, it's different from everyone elses :X
i asked my friend but she said the same but when i played it i could hear myself. or maybe cause i was nervous & i'm hearing things .

more comments please? i want to improve but don't know how

[C13L]

it's kinda off tune in places... try to sing with more power or articulate it better cause the words sound kinda slurred and sounds like you're tired.

keep on singing ^^

[iloveyg]

yeah i couldn't really hear your voice much. like what C13L said, it sounds like your kinda tired. but keep trying! it was pretty good.

[x3wendy]

thanks for the comments guys ^^ yeah i think i'm gonna try recording it again tonight to see if i can be louder :] i'll come back to edit.

[xkiseki]

it's not bad, but i can barely hear you. can you re-record or soemthing please?

[x3wendy]

okay. since people said that they couldn't hear me. i tried it again, but there's an echo effect on it so you can tell my voice clearer (hopefully). What I think: i noticed that i was a few milliseconds late on one of the part & i still slur on some of the words. what do you guys think i could do to get better? I know there are a lot of great soompier singers here, help me out please ^^ compare the first to the second one :] both uploaded on my soundclick the more comments the merrier =)

[mikez]

yea im listening right now, your singing is there, on pitch and key. but rather lazy.. sounds a little moaning ish haha

sing like you meant it next time! *supports*

and less reverb would be nice, but thats not so important the dude rapping is sick, one day i wish to rap like that haha

[x3wendy]

mikez: lol. i've heard your stuff before but never really left a comment >< sorry :X but always love your rapping. one day you will rap like bigbang<3 :] & if you produce a cd in the future, i'll be sure to get it ;b thnks for the support =D. i'll try again... some day...

[x3wendy]

okay so i tried it again click but this time with instrumental & the otehr one was i dont rmember :X